[ONESHOT] Midnight Express

[mountainmadman]

It’s midnight and I find myself sitting alone in the last car of the last train of the night, the wheels clickety-clacking beneath my legs as the subway train bears down on the final leg of its journey from downtown to the suburbs, where I live.

My car’s been empty for the past five stations. The last passenger before me, an old man hobbling on a

Comments

[babypillow]

thanks for this ..... a little heavy and depressing but i like it!! it's different from the normal story line .... almost feel pity for them but yet, they seem strong enough to go through this dark period without each other.

[lamb_bleats]

You're fast! Being inspired by a real life event yields results... :O)

Here's hoping you'll meet your train girl again soon...Best of luck & be brave!

[akapugs]

very well written and a good story. Never thought you could write something like this, but I like the true story better.

[ext_438763]

it is so sad. are u trying to write all sad one to let your Lizzy with yonghwa in the story? hahahahaha

[faisazali]

I always like your writing style…
So much of curiosity and question marks here and there (well…not so much actually… ^^)
Although no names are been mentioned, I guess the plot can tell us enough…
Thanks a lot M3!!! ^^