swimming alone

Aug 31, 2006 23:36

well, im at a Ramada Inn with a slide and it sux. ha. its just not the same without a friend. there is a nice fountain right by me though ( Read more... )

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"[we] knew a poem when we saw one, and were grateful." _electric_monk September 1 2006, 06:46:17 UTC
"swimming alone"... haha

i got this greet visual of you treading water in jean cut-offs, stylish swoopy hair all dry and in perfect (dis)array.

...some kid seemingly hovers past you with inflatable arm floaters, legs kicking furiously but splashlessly below him, not yet grasping the concept of horizontal swimming; also oblivious to you with his painted-on smile and gaze fixed on a parent, who reciprocates with some affirming cheer.

...maybe his sister momentarily steals his glory with an impressive splash upon being ejected from the waterslide.

all the while you still tread water, safely, calmly. ...silently pining for a flipjargendy-style cannon ball to your left. or the site of stop_the_car's proud doggie-paddle smile.

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SPLAAASH!!! flipjargendy September 7 2006, 01:21:12 UTC
    my cannonball would turn him over in his water. i would feel bad.

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