Broken Glass [sequel] - Any Other Night - 8/9 - On Living

[motsureru]

Author: motsureru

Title: Broken Glass [sequel] - Any Other Night - 8/9 - On Living

Rating: NC-17 Overall

Spoilers/Summary: Season 1. A continuation after Season 1, Sylar/Mohinder-centric

Notes: Thanks to hugh for beta work~

Word Count: 4,981

Teaser:  “You like this persona. I’ve seen it.”

.8 On Living

They had fallen asleep curled up

Comments

[ilovetbag24]

I love you, you know that? This was absolutely spectacular!! The love scene is so wanton and desperate between them, it's delcious!! I'm so upset that there's only one more part left!! I can't wait to see what happens! I'm scared of how it's going to end!

[motsureru]

I'm scared of how it's going to end!

That's what people said the first time and then you got a sequel! ^_~ Well, hopefully the imminent ending isn't too frightening for you. I'm glad you enjoyed this section, and everyone got their smut... :3

Thanks for reading it and I'm glad I've got you sucked in!

LOLOLOLOL at the awkward 'are u gay?' question of Sylar.

[chiare]

Sylar shaving Mohinder that turned to WALL!Bathroom!Sex @ random shady motel FTMW! Asflahsdakjgdk!!!That was so ~intense~ that I barely forgot to breathe. Whoa. Your sex scenes are just guh. Guh is a word right?

HAPPY MYLAR OMG! YOUR HAPPY MYLAR MADE ME CRY(again)!!!! T_T These are happy tears.

Oh noes! The HATIAN and HRG! WTF!? GO AWAAAAAY!! Let them be. Seriously, I don'te get to see Sylar and Mo genuinely happy in any fic.

Only one chapter left. I'm going to miss this series so much! SO MUCH! T_T I <3 this fic.

Re: LOLOLOLOL at the awkward 'are u gay?' question of Sylar.

[motsureru]

Guh is certainly a word. ^_~ It was such an interesting scene to write- making something so mundane become erotic between them because of their closeness and the seriousness with which they take everything. ^~

And yes, happy mylar when done seriously can be really moving. I made my beta almost cry a couple times.

And, speaking of hot shaving scenes, WHERE did you get your icon? That is very, very sexy. I think it's one I definitely want to snag- but there's no credit? Did you make it? :3

[ladywilde80]

Oh I can see how this ends... and good god, I think I just wrote the same damn ending to one of my stories.. LOL.

BUT

'sides the panic of having to write a new ending, I have to say this was my FAVORITE chapter thus far' the emotion and the intensity between them is simply unreal and written so beautifully, my heart literally hurts...

Just wow, so much wow! You are simply a genius and your writing is too amazing for word.

Wonderful chpt. I cannot wait to see how this plays out.

[motsureru]

Can you really see how this ends? Maybe we'll have to talk... :P Haven't seen you online lately.

But anyway, I'm surprised you liked this chapter most- I don't know what I'd particularly call my own favorite chapter, but hmm. I'll keep that in mind. ^~

Thanks for the compliments and comments! We'll talk soon.

[louiex]

Really, really only one more part? I'm terrified and yet at the same excited that this keeps going! This part was so wonderfully hot!!

[motsureru]

Really, only one more part... unless I get some other inspiration in this 'verse. We shall see. ^^ Thanks so much for reading! Hope the ending keeps you just as enthralled.

MULTIPLE ENDINGS!!

[anonymous]

stupendous. superb. wonderful.

the list could go on and on...

seriously though, if you have a sad ending and they don't end up together, i think i might harm myself out of depression.

so...the only way to fix this would be to have multiple endings *nod nod* :)

thank you for this...during exam times, it's so refreshing to read quality fic about attractive men

hehe

Re: MULTIPLE ENDINGS!!

[motsureru]

Oh yes, during exam time is when I get some of my best writing done... when I'm not supposed to.. ^_~

Won't be able to handle a sad ending?! This is mylar! It's so rare that they get a happy one. :P

Well, I won't say anything about the next part, but I hope you enjoy it no matter what turn it takes. ^_^ Thanks for reading!