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Broken Glass - Any Other Night - 1/9 - Smiles

Oct 10, 2007 08:18

Author: motsureru

Title: Broken Glass - Any Other Night - 1/? - Smiles

Rating: NC-17 Overall

Spoilers/Summary: Season 1. A continuation after Season 1, Sylar/Mohinder-centric

Notes: Thanks to hugh for beta work~

Word Count: 3,296

Teaser: To Mohinder the differences were subtle. The few times he glanced up and their eyes chanced to meet there was an ( Read more... )

any other night, fic, chapter 1

Comments 43

be_found October 10 2007, 17:14:42 UTC

Oh god I am so excited by this! There has been a lack of decent Mylar around lately and this fits the billy perfectly. I love how they aren't just happy and having sex, they have doubts, there is awkwardness.

motsureru October 10 2007, 20:18:59 UTC

I noticed that too. ;-; I'm happy there are many new posts and a few done nicely but it feels like the age of multipart fics has ended... tear.

Like I mentioned before, I'm glad people enjoy that Mo and Sy are having doubts and aren't really sure what to do after the situations in Broken Glass. Many writers are just happy with the 'oh well, they slept together heart heart true love time for some sappy fluff' but real life isn't like that. The two of them have too much baggage to really know what to do with the unintentional relationship they're making. Pleased to see people realize that. :3

Thanks again for posting!

flwrpwr_vampyre October 10 2007, 18:54:35 UTC

I had to go back and read the other story before I got to this and it was worth it. You have made a great AU and I love the interaction between Sylar and Mohinder. I can't wait until you post more.

motsureru October 10 2007, 20:20:41 UTC

Thanks so much for making the effort to back and read it! ^_^ I know it's long so the idea can be very daunting of coming in later on multipart fics. But I'm happy you stuck with it and enjoyed it! Hope to keep you entertained and interested through the next parts as well. ^_~ Thanks for commenting! Much appreciated!

onthelist898 October 10 2007, 19:27:36 UTC

Sequel! YES! XD

I just read Broken Glass in one sitting a few days ago and loved it. And THIS is a nice way to start a sequel off. I'm already excited!

Can't wait for more! <33

motsureru October 10 2007, 20:21:57 UTC

Lucky you to read it only a few days ago! The rest of them got a good month-long hiatus there while I got my life back together. ^_~ So happy to hear you're enjoying what I've got, though! This won't be as long as Broken Glass, I'm fairly sure, but it's nice to be able to write such extensive character development. Hope you enjoy it too! :3 Thanks for reading~!

levitatethis October 10 2007, 21:40:27 UTC

I'm so thrilled to see the sequel! I love their interactions and the deep nagging thoughts in the back of both of their minds...love them trying to figure out what the other is thinking...trying to make sense of the other person's actions. Looking forward to the next part.

motsureru October 11 2007, 02:35:25 UTC

Yes, it's definitely been a challenge to write anymore because I don't only have regular characterization to write, but the dual issues of each of them trying to act in such a way that they're trying to play the other one, while also attempting to figure out what the other is thinking. So hard! xD

Thanks so much for commenting! Looking forward to hearing more from you and reading more of your stuff too. ^^

poemwithnorhyme October 10 2007, 23:07:58 UTC

Wow..you are seriously a step away from being a writing God..XD! When I saw you posted, I spazed out so badly. I've been having a really, really bad week, so seeing this is just amazing! And wow, the tension, the slow familiarity you've made every reader feel, just..fantastic. And I love seeing the return of Preston, he's friggin' cool, a good cop. I also like that they haven't given up on finding them. And that last line to the chapter, brilliant! I'm so glad you're writing a sequel, thank you!

"...moaned satisfaction from hands that rung blood out of the innocent." <-- "rung blood out of the innocent." There's just something about this that is just utterly perfect!

motsureru October 11 2007, 02:37:52 UTC

Awww don't flatter me so much! But I'm glad it improved your day a little. ^_^ I'm also always happen to see a Preston fan. Poor guy. :D He gets beat up on a lot in the 'I'm trying to be a good cop' department. We'll get some more of him...

Glad you enjoyed it so much. ^^ I was worried about it being boring to start off with, since they have so much development to go. @.@ Happy you liked it though! Thanks for commenting!