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kael_raye January 19 2008, 05:22:43 UTC
Whee!!! Me likes the dominant Sy! Hee! :D That was really really yummy!

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motsureru January 19 2008, 18:00:14 UTC
Who doesn't like dominant Sylar? ^_~ Mohinder certainly doesn't mind, methinks... xD

Thanks for reading!

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greyelveneyes January 19 2008, 05:32:27 UTC
Oh my goodness, there are so many moments of hilarity in here, but THIS one is probably my favorite for some reason:

Sylar wondered, quite sincerely, what the man’s brains would look like splattered across that laboratory floor.

I just...it was so inappropriately funny, and I repeated the sentence back to everyone in my household, and everyone thought it was hilarious, as demented as it is.

Plus...you put smutty goodness in this that I've been DYING to see more of in Mylar fiction. *squees* I'm such a happy fangirl right now. XD

WIN. WIN. WIN.

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motsureru January 19 2008, 18:08:27 UTC
There were a lot of unexpectedly hilarious lines in this. I enjoyed writing this chapter a lot, so many things came to head (no pun intended) that had been built up to. ^_^

It's really amusing that everyone in your house found the odd nature of that sentence funny. xD

And yes, the smut must occur sometimes. And when it does... ^_~ Thanks for reading and commenting!

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ilovetbag24 January 19 2008, 05:54:30 UTC
I knew after a while Sylar would get sick and tired of not being in control and just plain take what he wanted!! I'm glad that it turned out to be Mohinder!! Great chapter!! And even though I know a bit more about Sebastian...I still hate the dude! He had better not get in between them or there will be hell to pay I'm sure! Sylar doesn't let up without a fight!!

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motsureru January 19 2008, 18:10:52 UTC
^_^ It was sort of built up that Sylar wasn't enjoying the lack of control deal, and it had to come out somehow, eh? ^~ A little sexual catharsis is never a bad idea... (Well, sometimes, but xD)

Oh Sebastian... but he's so happy and Mohinder-enthusiastic... ^_^

Hope the rest will be just as exciting! ^~ Thanks for reading~

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mistressmerr January 19 2008, 07:30:06 UTC
I don't think I've commented much on this one. But I'm still reading this thing. Still loving it. Sebastian is an interesting unknown element. And Mama Suresh is awesome. Love!

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motsureru January 19 2008, 18:12:08 UTC
Definitely an unknown element. ^_^ Although I typically don't enjoy using original characters to a great extent, I wanted to be able to include a substantial one here and hopefully make it work. So I do hope that Sebastian is at least a little interesting, even if people are wary of him. ^~

And yes, go Mama Suresh. :D

Glad you're still reading and enjoying! More soon! Thanks!

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mabetini January 19 2008, 08:04:29 UTC
WEEEE ( ... )

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motsureru January 19 2008, 18:17:53 UTC
That was one of my favorite lines to write in this chapter, actually. xD It's just one of those lines that makes you think of the totally indignant look on Sylar's face and makes you grin about it. :P

The forced oral sex part actually came to me on a whim. I knew that Sylar had to assert himself somehow, and that it was going to be sexual, but it wasn't until I had the London idea come to mind that I decided on it. I'm glad it worked out so well. ^_~

And yes, I had to put in that Anjali part. I think that just like anyone else Mohinder needs a reassuring hand from a motherly figure every now and then, and that she would continue to support her son no matter what it was for. ^_^

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, hope it's just as good the second time around! ^_~

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