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greyelveneyes January 16 2008, 05:29:31 UTC
I love, love, love your Haitian. Have I told you that? He is so made of win.

He was a naive weapon the Haitian was unwilling to see used for either side. <-- Haitian, you are AMAZINGLY AWESOME. ♥♥♥

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motsureru January 16 2008, 18:41:17 UTC
Hehe, I'm glad the Haitian has such love. I really, really did enjoy using him in this story. It just seems that in the face of Mohinder and Sylar with their business and Bennet so hardcore into his beliefs that the Haitian is a much-needed breath of reason, sometimes. I think he, like anyone else, would be wary of letting Peter Petrelli be used. ^_^

The Haitian does need more love! I don't remember the next chapter he's in, but he'll be around. ^_^ Thanks for commenting!

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ladywilde80 January 16 2008, 05:37:37 UTC
Oh I am so glad I refreshed my friends page before bed. What an awesome chapter. That was hot even w.o. the sex!! XD I loved the internal monologue Sylar had going, the interruption, the discussion of the paintings, and the end. Oh wow. This is getting so good. The build up is incredible.

Is it Saturday yet? I love this story. Wonderful chapter!

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motsureru January 16 2008, 18:43:39 UTC
It was, I'll admit, really tempting to go back and write that missing London scene. I imagine Mohinder as the type of guy who, even though he's in this relationship, would have a strange aversion to certain sexual acts with Sylar because so much of the way they interact is a power play. ^~

And the plot thickens... Happy you enjoyed this chapter so much, if you liked this, I think the next chapter will really get you... ^_^ Thanks!

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kael_raye January 16 2008, 05:42:32 UTC
Hee! I just love the way you write! Your Haitian characterization is awesome!

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motsureru January 16 2008, 18:44:30 UTC
I wasn't expecting such Haitian love in this chapter, but I'm happy people like him a lot. I think he was really complicated to write, simply because he's so complex under a minimalist attitude... ^_^ More of him later! Thanks for commenting!

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furius January 16 2008, 06:33:14 UTC
I'm very charmed by how Sylar wants to reciprocate.

The layer of plot's fantastic.

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motsureru January 16 2008, 18:46:25 UTC
Can't you just see Sylar wanting to become great at whatever he does? ^_~ Anything he does? If he's going to be sleeping with Mohinder, he certainly doesn't want to be bad at it, much less uninformed... It's all a very clever way to learn more about his lover, in some ways... ^_^

And the plot's only going to get thicker...! Look forward to Saturday. ^_~ Thanks for reading and commenting!

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furius January 18 2008, 19:50:57 UTC
If "fairly drunk" doesn't impair with Sylar's..abilities...he really does have great potential to become great at it. I keep wondering about Mohinder's reaction when he learns that he's Sylar's one and only and has unwittingly taken on the role of a tutor, so to speak...

Looking forward to Saturday! XD

-furius

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clarkangel January 16 2008, 10:50:32 UTC
Fabulous! Bad mommy! Loved the call from Bennet and Sylar looking fwd to France. Me too. Heee

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motsureru January 16 2008, 18:48:31 UTC
Oh, France will be here soon. The next chapter, actually. ^_~ Then things start to get better... Everyone should look forward to it! We'll get a little more Mohinder/Sylar time in the near future than Bennet time. But who can complain of that? ^_~

Thanks for reading and commenting! Til Saturday!

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