semi-fiction: Paint My Soul on the Bathroom Wall

Sep 22, 2008 17:39

Title: Paint My Soul on the Bathroom Wall
Genre: Semi-fiction
Words: 361
Rating: PG-13 for language.
Summary: And now she's reduced to crying in a bathroom stall; alone except for the graffiti scratched into the sickening yellow paint of the stall door.

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paint my soul on the bathroom wall )

semi-fiction, rating: pg-13

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backtograce September 22 2008, 22:56:45 UTC
I like this. It was a great little peak into a broken girl's life, and shows perfectly how people are afraid to reach out and touch other people.

Great job.

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fiddlings September 22 2008, 22:59:43 UTC
Thanks! :)

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stop_theworld September 23 2008, 04:14:02 UTC
Heartbreaking and touching, and so beautiful.

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fiddlings September 23 2008, 12:33:08 UTC
♥ !

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fiddlings October 6 2008, 02:17:01 UTC
♥ !

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