good thing no one cares

[motorbike]

Original scrap. Awkward dialogue. Everyone in my stories is super irritating lol. Wrapping this up slowly, thousands or words, but time constraints etc. At least it's ok writing practice to rev me up for more important things! I need to do better than plain scene direction, but I am not very good with the way characters FEEEEL about shit idk. Oh

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[bluebombardier]

THIS IS FANTASTIC IS WHAT IT IS.

It felt like I was reading a Coen brothers comedy.

[motorbike]

p-possibly the best compliment I will ever receive thank you wow, haha

[jongun78]

first part was a bit confusing and didn't flow as well as the other parts, but starting from man falling out of tree, it was very well orchestrated. Really liked the way you described driving through town.

Oh and I watched a video where this biker gang in Switzerland went on like a 100-mile ride through some twisties on minibikes. It was pretty cool :) Unfortunately, they're not street-legal in the US.

Speaking of which, will be going on a camping trip on my bike to Soda Lake next week, also thinking about going to see the Redwoods up in NorCal, really want to take a picture of my bike going through the drive-thru tree. I missed out on a lot of good roads last time so will take my time this trip :)

[motorbike]

Oh, do bring back photos!

[jongun78]

of course :)