[fic] heroes: away, away

Oct 03, 2010 07:19

Title: Away, Away
Author: motorbabyx 
Rating: PG-13 for theme.
Characters: Jeremy Greer, mentions of Noah Bennet
Pairings: None
Spoilers: Tabula Rasa/Strange Attractors (s4)
Warnings: Angst, minor character, character death.
Disclaimer: If Heroes was mine, it would still be on TV.  So, clearly, it is not.

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warning: angst, fic: heroes, warning: character death, char: jeremy greer, rating: pg13, char: noah bennet, spoilers, pairing: none

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angary October 18 2010, 14:17:56 UTC
Wow. This is very heartbreaking, and reminded me of just how tragic Jeremy's story was. This works really well in that I actually get the sense of all the fight going out of the poor guy, and the brief flash of disappointment, the cold acknowledgment that yet another person had let him down.

Great job!

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motorbabyx October 18 2010, 22:12:14 UTC
wow, thank you so much! usually all i ever write is cute fluffy stuff (though everything i have posted here on lj is decidedly not), so it means a lot to know i was able to convey something other than my norm.

jeremy's story was a favorite of mine (obviously), and though it was a darker moment in heroes, i think they handled it perfectly.

thank you for the comment! <3

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flwrpwr_vampyre October 21 2010, 01:54:07 UTC
Oh my god, my heart. I had to go back and rewatch his eps after reading this and it sums it up perfectly. His disappointment is so sad because of how much Bennett finally wanted to be able to help someone he'd neglected.

I thought the worst thing was how much he blamed himself. He basically committed suicide because he couldn't forgive himself for something he couldn't even control.

Oh my god, I'll shut up before I draft out an essay here.

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motorbabyx October 22 2010, 00:59:21 UTC
dfkgsdf, your comment gave me giggles of the happy. <33 this fic was my almost immediate reaction to his eps, so i've only seen them the once. i definitely need to get season 4 though, just so i can rewatch his bits...-shakes fist at netflix's slowness-
yesyes, and you can just tell he thinks it's all bullshit.

dear god, yes - sick though it may be, that's definitely the moment i fell in love with his character. as depressing as his entire arc is, just...i think it's gorgeous. /sickbastard

ffft, never shut up, i loves it. <3

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flwrpwr_vampyre October 22 2010, 20:05:49 UTC
I can get you streaming links if you roll that way. So you can rewatch them. For science. *nods*

At that stage I was just covering my mouth in shock. And cursing my affinity for falling in love with another character with bit part. On the rewatch I was kind of just perving 'cause he has nice hands. I'm just sayin'.

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motorbabyx October 23 2010, 04:35:13 UTC
oohohoh really? that would be pretty sweet, man - netflix bitchslaps my computer every time i try to watch 'em on there. i'm cool with that stuff so long as i know i'll be buying it at some point in the future.
yes...science...-coughcough-

they make it so easy, though...sigh.

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