I'm really sorry that I'm such a chicken that I'm going anon for this! I don't want you to hate me D:
I really like your Yamamoto, and he's got a TON of potential, but I think that sometimes you take the stupid a little too far for the sake of the lulz. The lulz are effective and a lot of fun! But Yamamoto is a smart kid underneath the derp, in canon. He catches on to things quickly, much to Gokudera's unending irritation. A good example is the impossible math assignment. Yamamoto was only failing because he hadn't bothered to read the chapter, but once he had, he breezed through the assignment.
I like that you give him that happy go lucky innocence, but for a fifteen year old boy to be as outstandingly and continually retarded about the whole sex thing...it's funny, but I really, really hope that you find another dimension to him before he burns you out.
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Right back at your Haru too!
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And jfc moto's been doing that ever since he arrived FFFF
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I really like your Yamamoto, and he's got a TON of potential, but I think that sometimes you take the stupid a little too far for the sake of the lulz. The lulz are effective and a lot of fun! But Yamamoto is a smart kid underneath the derp, in canon. He catches on to things quickly, much to Gokudera's unending irritation. A good example is the impossible math assignment. Yamamoto was only failing because he hadn't bothered to read the chapter, but once he had, he breezed through the assignment.
I like that you give him that happy go lucky innocence, but for a fifteen year old boy to be as outstandingly and continually retarded about the whole sex thing...it's funny, but I really, really hope that you find another dimension to him before he burns you out.
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And oddly enough isn't particularly disturbed by it and is kinda going around just going "oh ok I know now! That's cool."
Of course he hasn't put any of that knowledge into practice yet, but --
Don't worry, I know what you mean (:
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