[☠fic] Shock

[motley_sis]

Title: Shock     Word count: 728
Author: motley_sis
Characters: Trowa, Duo, OC
Rating: R     Warnings: Suggestion of violent rape; heavy angst/agony, coarse language. Heed these warnings.
Notes: Disturbing outcome of a style experiment, written on the waves of insomnia. First non-kooky fic. Posted here as containing "adult concepts

Comments

[ederyn]

I told you how much I loved this at gw500 but it looks so lonely here having no comments on it. Waaaah! You see now the benefit of linking back to your journal? Then all the comments have to collect in one spot. Wooties! I have to do that anyway since I edit my ficcies every so often and then get embarrassed when the old version is still up on various comms I'm too lazy to update. Doh! What was I talking about again? Oh, yes!  Me!  Actually, I love this fic because it's the kind of thing I'd write, and I'm jealous that I didn't write it first. Waaaaaaaaah!!

[motley_sis]

Thanks again! Sorry for writing it first - no, wait, not sorry. This is momentarily my favourite fic of the ones I have written. Hope to do darker stuff, though.
You are very right; it's a good idea to link back to my journal. *considers* I am actually quite an edit-freak (never satisfied, overly neurotic, fussy and perfectionistic) and when I do secret edits, I have to do them three times: once in the file in my computer, once in this journal, and once in the comm it's posted.

[black_hairgirl]

*lip tremble* Oh no.... T___T Good job. Damn it, since I joined that blasted gw_dark comm I have cried like every day... *wipes eyes*

I like! Good job as one of your first, too!

[motley_sis]

Ah, eh. You cried? *blushes* Oh, wow. I'm sorry!

Thank you for reading and commenting... you are at work??

[black_hairgirl]

Yep! *salute* I am a current a full-time nursie for one special needs patient and when said patient wants nothing to do with me, needs no suctioning, and/or is taking a nap I am left with fandom. O___o; And organizing drawers of supplies.

Getting paid to read fic! AMAZING!

[motley_sis]

Oh wow, NOW we're talking! XD Fantastic...
Yes, I remember you saying somewhere that you write a lot at work. That's great! :D

[terravayne]

Oh, very nice. It's just a bit obscure, just a bit agonizing, and packed with excellent imagery. It's a tough subject you were wrangling and you described his reaction very well.

[motley_sis]

Thanks for reading and commenting, Terra! :D

The topic was hard to write, but maybe even harder to post. As one of my first submissions, in a non-standard form, without pairings, and in a comm that mainly receives urm.. slightly more light-hearted  fics for the posted prompts, I much feared angry mobs.  (o_O)

Glad the imagery manages to please you!