Oh My god! That was GREAT! I enjoyed the whole story, but then I got to this part: -- Thank God. Come to think of it, it would be quite a weird situation - making love when your ex-lover sleeps in the next room... For a moment Spike was petrified. Then he realised she was talking about herself. And I laughed like a hyena! Thanks for writing.
It was my first fic written in English. When I reread it before reposting here, I noticed a lot of "russianisms" but I didn't change anything because, frankly, I was afraid to make it worse. Thanks for commenting. I'm glad that the final small misunderstanding works the way I wanted it to work. :)
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I enjoyed the whole story, but then I got to this part:
-- Thank God. Come to think of it, it would be quite a weird situation - making love when your ex-lover sleeps in the next room...
For a moment Spike was petrified. Then he realised she was talking about herself.
And I laughed like a hyena!
Thanks for writing.
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Thanks for commenting. I'm glad that the final small misunderstanding works the way I wanted it to work. :)
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