These are awesome. Great River voice, and I love the glimpses of Kaylee through her eyes. But, of course, the Lilah/Fred think blew me away. The last line is hi-larious, but the entire conceit was all at once clever and funny and sad and AtS-appropriate. Poor licorice-hating, practical Lilah. Postcoital promises coming back to bite her in the ass, hee! I hope that's some comfort in Hell.
I do love the way you write River; there's something unhinged yet deeply profound about the way thoughts connect and disconnect in her mind. And you have her say the most beautiful, disturbing things. I keep coming back to the last paragraph, re-reading, soaking up the image and the words.
Thank you! Writing River really takes me back to my undergrad poetry workshop days -- it seems like all I have to do to get her voice is to pretend I'm writing a prose poem. I can cover a lot of ground in a small number of words, and that's a lot of fun.
That said, you're probably just going to find this next question annoying, but is there any chance I could outside-link it? If not on the archive fanfic page, then on a separate page for 'outside links & recs'? It's a rare pairing, so good fics are like gold.
Yeah, as you guessed, I'd rather it not be linked, either. I'm seriously flattered that you like the ficlet, but I really don't want it to be archived in any way.
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Thanks for posting this.
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Thanks for the thought, though, and I'm glad you like the fic!
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