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roxymissrose October 21 2013, 01:03:58 UTC
Oh, I'm so sorry that it's over! I loved this story! I loved Jared and how good he was, so good he caught they attention of a god and made him fall in love with him.

I hope that everyone sees what became of Jared. I hope that his brother recognizes that Jared has a very forgiving soul.

I loved the way this flowed--it had the feeling of one of the old-fashioned fairy tales as well as being very modern. In my head, the story looked like it was illustrated by Kay Nielsen. Just lovely, from start to finish! Thank you so much for sharing this! :)

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tcs1121 October 21 2013, 12:30:35 UTC
Lovely, lovely, lovely. Like a song or a poem. And they end up side by side riding throughout the world.

Loved it. Thank you for sharing!

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mre_quecky November 7 2013, 09:37:09 UTC
yippieh, loved this story! Thanks for sharing!

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anonymous June 24 2014, 23:41:28 UTC
I didn't see that there was a part 5 for this story. So glad that I looked for it for re-reading and discovered that it was finished.

This was such a wonderful tale. Thanks for sharing :-)

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