Oh, I'm so sorry that it's over! I loved this story! I loved Jared and how good he was, so good he caught they attention of a god and made him fall in love with him.
I hope that everyone sees what became of Jared. I hope that his brother recognizes that Jared has a very forgiving soul.
I loved the way this flowed--it had the feeling of one of the old-fashioned fairy tales as well as being very modern. In my head, the story looked like it was illustrated by Kay Nielsen. Just lovely, from start to finish! Thank you so much for sharing this! :)
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I hope that everyone sees what became of Jared. I hope that his brother recognizes that Jared has a very forgiving soul.
I loved the way this flowed--it had the feeling of one of the old-fashioned fairy tales as well as being very modern. In my head, the story looked like it was illustrated by Kay Nielsen. Just lovely, from start to finish! Thank you so much for sharing this! :)
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Loved it. Thank you for sharing!
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This was such a wonderful tale. Thanks for sharing :-)
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