Comments | morvith: Three golden fishes (2/2)

morvith

Three golden fishes (2/2) - J2 AU

Mar 22, 2011 19:49

Warnings: English is not my native tongue. Please let me know if you catch any mistakes.

Part I

( Part II )

pg, j2, three golden fishes, russian fairytale, au

Comments 11

sadritsuka12 March 22 2011, 23:02:14 UTC

AWWWWE.. SOO SWEET.. LOVE IT AWWWE THEY TOGTHER.. LOL AWWWE JARED IS AWOEMSE JENSEN IS LUCKY TO HAVE JARED,, LOL

morvith April 1 2011, 20:13:44 UTC

They were both very lucky ;-)
Thank you for reviewing

nong_pradu March 23 2011, 01:44:08 UTC

This was really delightful, and, I have to say, impressive. Your writing style is fluid and reads effortlessly, without any mistakes that I noticed. Considering most people whose native language is English don't write that well, I've definitely got to commend you. You definitely didn't need to warn us, anyway.

Very well done!

morvith April 1 2011, 20:12:53 UTC

You're really too kind - I'm really glad you liked my writing, especially because I had some trouble with the ending.
I really love the English language so I always tend to be very careful, though I guess after all this time I could move it to the author's notes.

Thank you again for reviewing and sorry for the delay: I couldn't use the computer.

tcs1121 March 23 2011, 01:56:34 UTC

A lovely story. Thank you.

morvith April 1 2011, 20:05:30 UTC

Thanks to you for commenting :-)

sonyat76 March 23 2011, 04:34:24 UTC

Beautifully written. I couldn't tell English isn't your first language.

morvith April 1 2011, 20:03:57 UTC

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. (Sorry for the delay, I couldn't use the computer)

unplugged32 May 16 2012, 16:03:30 UTC

This story is very sweet, well done!

morvith May 22 2012, 08:41:47 UTC

Thank you for commenting. One of the projects I'm working on is another Russian fairy tale, if you're interested.