It was always you

[morrisseyislove]

Title: It was always you
Author: Tuesdae/morrisseyislove
Fandom: Thor & The Avengers movie-verse
Pairing: Thor/Loki
Rating: PG for mentions of adult situations
Warnings: Psuedo-incest, slight spoilers for Thor and The Avengers
Word Count: 1353
Summary: prompt from norsekink In Asgard, every child possess magic, but they lose it with their first true love. That's why magic

Comments

BIG, pedantic comment of doom.

[daffenger]

So: first of all, thanks for filling my prompt

Re: BIG, pedantic comment of doom.

[morrisseyislove]

Oh my goodness, oh my gracious me, thank you. I tried to stay true to the rich characters given to us in the films and you're giving me the impression I did well, which fills me with glee. I'm glad that the passage of time wasn't too harsh; I've read some particularly rough ones myself.

As for "Perhaps I shall leave them on you during", that was meant to allude to a sexy time dance wherein Loki is handcuffed (the "them" referenced being the cuffs Loki had just complained of). Does that make more sense?

Re: BIG, pedantic comment of doom.

[daffenger]

Oh, okay, I thought it may have been a typo ^^ Well, then maybe the punctuation should mark the fact that Thor is, voluntarily, not saying something. Like "Perhaps I shall leave them on you, during..." to imitate the rhythm of his speech (if he was interrupted, the punctuation would be "Perhaps I shall leave them on you during-")

And another thing (and then promise I'll stop talking), you said and I quote "I haven't written in forever", so probably this is your first prompt in this kinkmeme, so did you remember to advertise your fill in the fill list ? (top of the page, there is a series of links to "round one", "round two", etc., and the first one on the left is to the "fill list", where you post a comment with link to the prompt and the fill you wrote). That's where most people check for new fills, so I think you would get more feedback, and readers, this way.
(yes, there was a lot of fills in this paragraph)

Also, lol to the sexy time dance thing.

Re: BIG, pedantic comment of doom.

[morrisseyislove]

Okay, good idea. I edited it and included the ellipses.

Yes, I registered this on the fill list. I'll try cross posting on Thor/The Avengers slash comms.

[pinkelephant42]

I love this. Your descriptions are so beautiful and the story is so heartfelt. <3

[morrisseyislove]

Thank you!

[nicevenn]

I absolutely adore this fic: I've recc'ed it here

[morrisseyislove]

Oh my goodness, thank you! What does the black heart symbolize?

[nicevenn]

Thank you for writing! The black heart is for angst. (There's a link to the key in the rec post).

[morrisseyislove]

[morrisseyislove]

Thank you!

[glayish]

That was... so .. PRECIOUS! I loved it from start to finish! Beautiful and sweet!