[FIC] "Prophesy," YanaKiri, PG
m.e. really should be getting her ass to work. she has less than 3 hours.
apologies, please: will reply to lj posts later. must retrieve head from real life and put it on straight before can hold semblance of decent conservation. conversation.
presenting this as final proof that today is yanakiri day. at least by my timezone.
( 'It's all going to happen anyway and I can't help it...' )
apologies, please: will reply to lj posts later. must retrieve head from real life and put it on straight before can hold semblance of decent conservation. conversation.
presenting this as final proof that today is yanakiri day. at least by my timezone.
( 'It's all going to happen anyway and I can't help it...' )
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I liked this - Renji's sense of order, Akaya's sense of chaos, the play of emotions and logic. And I like that Akaya planned to find Renji. It makes me wonder how long he's liked Renji, and if Renji ever realized that he did on any level.
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scary how yanakiri seems to bite us all at the same time, huh? ^^;
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*head desk head desk head desk*
*incoherent*
God, this was so good. >_< It's like all the things in psychology that I learned, and then some. It's all rolled up into one nice, angsty package where there's that constant underlying tension and dreariness (since this IS in Yanagi's perspective) and then the disequilibrium of Akaya's bounciness which then rolls into the dreary tension in the climax, and then all smooths out. It's wonderful.
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glad you liked. "disequilibrium" might just be a better title for this story, though i'm sticking with the one i got first, for sentimental reasons :3
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...and that is further proof that Youko has stayed in Psych(o) class too long.
I loved this story X3 And your title's good, too X3 Calling "Disequilibrium" would have been too much of a giveaway.
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*____* you know what, piaget's disequilibrium as you explained it just describes yanakiri SPOT ON. i really, really want to research on this now. hey, you'd make a good psycho(logist) XP
seriously though...thanks lots for the info <3
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I have to squeal at you over IM or something to impart the full force of the love. for now, I LOVE THIS KIRI. he is such a brilliant and lost boy. more later. argh. hate study.
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(wants to make you yanakiri icons. but has no idea what images to use yet...)
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I dunno if you did this on purpose, but there was this whole sense of Renji building up a wall around himself with all his routines, which is sad because after the Inui thing I'd think Renji has done enough emotion-walling to himself. and then you mentioned something about tragedies past, and since that wasn't explained you realise you have to write a SEQUEL, YA :E
and it seems only fitting really that Kiri should be the one to go to him and knock on his door (which probably never opens unless he predicts it), and drag him into bed initiate the hot angsty sex intimacy. I LOVE YOUR GROWN-UP KIRI <333 he is, okay bigger and naughtier and a little less gawky, but as your Renji said, he's the sort of person you hope is safely under a roof when you're not around and it's raining. your Renji says all the right things, doesn't he.
I am so shamelessly in love :E
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*_____* So. Much. Love.
I adore the style of this piece, the detached narrative that fits Renji so well, and how Akaya's presence among the order is so abrupt, discordant, and yet he and Renji still fit together and eee I am becoming incoherent again.
*hearts you madly for this*
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is the empire of ghei not getting restless due to its continuing lack of an heir?!
...what, you want me to make Favoured Handmaiden Kabaji pregnant? (Brain. OW.) Because Akaya-kitty has made sure that Monarch Atobe sure as hell ain't getting Prince(ss) Yuki. XDD
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(so that means monarch atobe finally realized his true love was right beside him all along, as the old imperial ballad goes?)
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you must fall deeply into this pairing's embrace. you know it. it calls to you!!
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