[Reborn drabble] Five Years to Realize

[morphaileffect]

omg it's valentine's day and everything, too. please pardon the emo T_T

as much as i adore teenage gokudera's "I R RIGTH HAND NOT U >:E", some part of me wants to believe this is the kind of importance he's shooting for.

I would like to be the air
that inhabits you for a moment
only. I would like to be that unnoticed
& that necessary.

Comments

[tragicallyditch]

holy shit i teared up.
oh my god. that was so amazing. GUHHHHH ;;
you captured 5927 like. perfectly. tsuna's death. ;_______; <3333
aldkghlaalhk. -dies-

[izelmecatl]

Oh wow~! That was really bittersweet and well written. It really does make you wonder just how much Gokudera really loves Tsuna (because i agree with you now that it has come beyod the point of just "liking") Keep up the awesome work~!

[makeste]

Beautiful, and for me it's a toss-up as to whether I like the first or the last two paragraphs best. It says a lot when you can both begin and end a fic as powerfully as this.

Love the way you describe Gokudera and Tsuna's relationship on both ends; 100% in character.

Friending you, hope that's okay. <3

[morphaileffect]

OKAY TO THE EXTREME! adding you back ♥

[demoerin]

My comment was going to be "AUGH", but that's hardly a decent reply to a fic, even if that's how the fic made me react. It's just so chock full of emotion stated in the right way. You've captured Gokudera's whatever the hell it is with regards to Tsuna, with the way it's made up of adoration and need and purpose and friendship. And thank you for linking to that beautiful poem. It really does read like what Gokudera wants.

[theprerogative]

B-SAN I RE-READ THIS BECOS I SAW THIS ON MY FLIST REC AND OMG I THINK I COULD LOVE YOU SOME MORE. THAT IS ALL. BUBBYE.