Fic: The days fall apart in your hands (5/5)

[morninglights]

Title: The days fall apart in your hands (5/5)
Pairing: Nino/OC, Nino/Ohno
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 4500
Warning: Canon-AU, Memory issues
Summary: After four months away working in America, Nino comes back to find everyone around him is acting strangely - and it's becoming increasingly worrying. When he tries to understand what really happened

Comments

[barefootprint]

I honestly don't know what to feel. While I pity Sayuri, I'm relieved that Nino's starting to let go and remember everything about Ohno.

Really, the feels on this ;___;

Thanks for sharing. Glad to be able to read your works again, bb :D

[morninglights]

Thank you, dear! It's good to hear from you again :)

[lilisan31]

Oh dear.. I don't know what to say.. "Wonderful !!" (it's good word)

Your end tinkle to me like the end of the movie "Inception", we don't really know the end in the end.. xD
I'm not sure for Nino, i think he's not very constant. Oh God i don't know ! xD
In all this storie, cherry blossom are qualified to Sayuri, then ok he know this not her in his real memories but.. Humm.. Maybe one part of me like for "Inception" see a drama or there is none.

In the begining you make me in the disorder, I thought the ghost was Oh'chan and in the end I thought Kazu remembered the scene, he saw Sayuri but didn't voluntarily helped knowing that by the way he would be at peace with Oh'chan.. ><
That would explain precisely why he punishes himself so much ne ~

Thank you so much for sharing your story ! Ohmiya Saiko ! Nya Lotus <3
See ya'
xoxo

Ps : There is a scene that would be interesting in pov, that Nino imagining sleep with Sayuri ><
We don't really know how he did it.

[morninglights]

Oh, yeah, that Inception ending, I absolutely love it. I mean, if you have a happy ending, then it's like "okay, nice", but you don't really think about it anymore. If you have a more open ending, then you normally keep thinking about it a bit longer ;) And I like it if people keep thinking about my stories for a while :D

I don't think Nino would be capable of voluntarily not helping Sayuri, though, because even though they argued a lot, he still liked here to the extent of thinking about breaking up with Ohno and for her to be happy. He didn't love her, but still, he cared a lot for her. And that's why he feels so guilty, even though he knows that it wasn't his fault in a way :)

I also think there are no restrictions when it comes to imaginations the human mind produces. It's a bit scary, tho :'D

Thank you for taking the time to leave such a long comment <3

[smile_arigatou]

I have to admit, I cried ;.; It was so sad how Nino seemed to lose everything but then it ended up not. And he had a lot of support behind him, and I'm happy that he can now be happy with Ohno.
Awesome story! Thank you for writing this!

[morninglights]

Thank you so much for commenting, dear :)

[ianne_xxyl]

I watch Dream House over the holidays, so I kinda know where the fic was going to go~ Nevertheless, I liked it very much~Thank you very very much!! :D

[morninglights]

Damn, I should have mentioned that movie at the end, not in the beginning :'D Still happy you could enjoy it!

[yoshiblack16]

So I was right to be afraid to read this fic but what do I do? I wait to read it the moment I know is going hit me hardest. I am an idiot, obviously.

At first I thought Nino was cheating on his wife with Ohno and that hurt, but then it turns out she was dead and it was a cover and that Nino was seeing an illusion of her hurt more.
Then I had to remind myself that it was an angsty fic and not a suspense because for a moment there I thought of the possibility that Ohno somehow killed Sayuri because she kept getting scared of him.

By the part where Nino doubt even Ohno was real I really hoped it turned out like it did because I wouldn't be able to take anything more.

And for that ending I'm just gonna do the Nino thing here and delude myself that it was Ohno arrived and sat beside him.

This was awesome as usual, thanks for writing it. :D

[morninglights]

But that's how we human beings are, we wait until it has the biggest impact on us. I can relate so much to this it's not even funny :') I'm still glad, you read it, though.

Oh, to imagine that Ohno killed her. Oh, shit. As much as I want to say he would never ever do such a thing, somehow, in a far far parallel universe, I can somehow see that. But that would be so more than just angst and I think I'd never be able to write such a story. It was hard enough to let Sayuri say, that it was practically Ohno's fault that she died, even if it wasn't.

Please think that it was Ohno, because I'm trying to do that as well. I wanted to write a happy end, actually, but this story wrote itself and in the end, I couldn't. It just didn't fit the rest of the story. I also don't know who it was that sat beside Nino in the end, but I really want to believe as well that it's been Ohno :')

Thank you for leaving such a long comment, I really appreciate it ♥ Thank you!