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[morlockiness]

Today in Lit we had to write our own versions of the short story by Tim O'Brien's The Things They Carried. McGrady told us to pick a group (I chose police force) and write our own take on a paragraph O'Brien wrote in that short story.

I kinda very much liked mine and thought I'd share it with you.

Comments

[scaredmonsters]

ive never read the original but i very much so liked your take on it :)
the descriptions are great

[morlockiness]

Thanks!

[lookat_thestars]

I've read that story and you did a very good job in your version!

[morlockiness]

Yay! Thanks!