Title: Storm Born Author: Morgen Summary: It was supposed to be their one chance to be together. Instead it plunged them straight into a nightmare. Disclaimer: I don't own LOTS or profit from it in any
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OMG THE END I LOVE IT. It's how I think I would end a chapter which might make me saying I love it vain but um...
I NEED TO EDIT THAT OUT NVM
I love this as always. I love Cara and Nox it's perfect! And R not bringing it up to them. OMG I"M MISSING THE POINT OF HTIS CHAPTER WHATEVER
I really like how you wrote R and K's relationship in this chapter. just shy of 10,000 but yes tehehe. It's not rushed yet just him caring for her still. Gah Im totalyl failing at explaining more than usual I think.
I really have no idea how you are going to fix this I like that though. And I like the poison asserting it self in other ways. ALSO can we just say OMG ZEDD DON"T GO
PERHAPS YOU ARE FAMILIAR WITH THIS RHYME: FIRST IS THE WORST, SECOND IS THE BEST... (VALALA, IF YOU'RE READING THIS, YOU'RE THE BEST TOO! I MEAN, YOU'RE HARDLY EVER FIRST ANYWAY. <333)
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR FINDING IT WONDERFUL. IDK, I'M A FAN OF THE POISON.
THIS CHAPTER IS AMAZING BB!!! <3333333 I think I only got to read the first parts. The part where she collapsed made want to cry. You know about me and my crying times. heee
The ending was so perfect! They are FINALLY starting to heal ALL THE WAY!! Also I agree with knownaskate that you need to be getting rid of that poison. We seem to agree a lot.
I can't believe that this will be OVER soon. :( I'll be sad and happy at the same time.
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I am ridiculous
OH HEY LOOK I haven't read this chapter! be back in an hour
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I NEED TO EDIT THAT OUT
NVM
I love this as always. I love Cara and Nox it's perfect! And R not bringing it up to them. OMG I"M MISSING THE POINT OF HTIS CHAPTER
WHATEVER
I really like how you wrote R and K's relationship in this chapter. just shy of 10,000 but yes tehehe. It's not rushed yet just him caring for her still. Gah Im totalyl failing at explaining more than usual I think.
I really have no idea how you are going to fix this I like that though. And I like the poison asserting it self in other ways. ALSO can we just say OMG ZEDD DON"T GO
I still love that last paragraph too hee.
ty!
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Heee. I ship Cara and Nox so much now, which is silly because it's all inside my head. BUT BASICALLY I AM REALLY GLAD YOU LIKED THE BITS ABOUT THEM.
Also yay for liking R and K! They are taking things slow with each other, but they're both there and that's what counts I think.
Lol I really like how everyone is expecting so much angst.
<333333 you.
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THIS WAS WONDERFUL BB BUT I AM THINKING IT IS TIME TO LOSE THE POISON MKAY?
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THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR FINDING IT WONDERFUL. IDK, I'M A FAN OF THE POISON.
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I like Cara's role in this too ^^
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And Cara's part too! :D
Thanks for reading!
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I think I'm having withdrawals.
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THIS CHAPTER IS AMAZING BB!!! <3333333 I think I only got to read the first parts. The part where she collapsed made want to cry. You know about me and my crying times. heee
The ending was so perfect! They are FINALLY starting to heal ALL THE WAY!! Also I agree with knownaskate that you need to be getting rid of that poison. We seem to agree a lot.
I can't believe that this will be OVER soon. :( I'll be sad and happy at the same time.
ILU BB!!! <3333333
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TY SO MUCH BB!!! Yes, I know very much about you and all your tears lol.
Yes, they are finally on the way to getting better. But I will tell you what I told Kate, and that is that I like the poison very much.
IKR. Just two more chapters.
LU2!!
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