fic: storm born - chapter forty-four

[morgenwrites]

Title: Storm Born
Author: Morgen
Summary: It was supposed to be their one chance to be together.  Instead it plunged them straight into a nightmare.
Disclaimer: I don't own LOTS or profit from it in any way.

Comments

[jlyncss]

FIRST!!!

(off to read now) :)

[jlyncss]

OMGoodness. LOVED. IT. ALL.

Okay, so just quote the entire thing here. Every word.

Then add this, 'cause it was my extra favorite:

“Don’t tell me that.” His voice was hard, and when he lifted his head, his eyes were filled with dark, dangerous things. “You were gone, Kahlan. My daughter was gone. I was already dead.” :'(

[morgenwrites]

Thank you so much!!! I'm so happy you enjoyed it. It was so nice to finally have R/K talking to each other again. Thanks for the feedback! :)

[morgenwrites]

YAY!!! :D

[morgenwrites]

Yes, she finally got to hold her daughter!!! It was something she needed so badly, and something R needed to see just as much. I'm so happy you're enjoying the story!! Thanks for reading. :D

[virkatjol]

I looooove this chapter so much bb!! Well I love it ALL so much!! R is still so broken though and it makes me BAWWWWW I maybe had crying times when I first read this chapter. :( But I TRUST YOU TO MAKE IT OKAY EVENTUALLY WITH 10K WORDS OF PORN TIMES. heeee <3333333

ILU BB and this chapter and this fic and YOU!

[morgenwrites]

Aww thank you bb! I'm so happy you are loving it. R is still recovering from being so scared, but finally being able to talk to K helped him a lot. AND YES, I AM FOND OF HAPPY ENDINGS. NOT PORNY ONES THOUGH.

TY for reading! <333

[ilovekahlancara]

I want to quote the whole thing because it was so amazing, but this was my favourite “You were gone, Kahlan. My daughter was gone. I was already dead.” made me cry again :')

She's awake and she held her baby :) Beautiful writing again Morgen

[morgenwrites]

Oh, thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked that line in particular. Poor Richard really felt like he'd lost everything when he realized K and his baby were taken into the Underworld. I don't think there's anything she could have said that would have made him not go after her.

And yes, she's finally held her baby!! :D TY again!!

[moonspinner]

*sobs* Oh dear Kahlan. Get you better soon. Thanks so much for this story. I was re-reading it and I came across this - I can't believe I missed it the first time around:

Cara toyed with one of her Agiels, pulling the golden chain back and forth between her fingers. She stared at it, her eyes gone glassy as if she were entranced by the weapon. It was awhile before she spoke again, "A Mord-Sith at my temple became pregnant. She needed special leathers made for her. Some of her pets thought to mock her, but they never laughed long. Her volatile moods made her work with the Agiel…inspired." A small smile turned the corners of her mouth, and Cara looked up. "Some of the best I've ever seen."

Cara was talking about herself, wasn't she?

ETA: Was the librarian the Creator?

ETA #2: The last one, I swear:

And even if her body finds some way to fight the poison and she
awakes, she will not be the same woman you knew before. She has the
Keeper's hands wrapped around her heart."

Oh noes. What does this mean?

[morgenwrites]

Thank you so much!! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story enough to re-read it. That makes me so happy. :D

And now, to answer your questions! Yes, yes, and that it's not all fixed now just because Kahlan opened her eyes. :( But ooh, that makes me so happy you noticed those things!

Thanks for reading!

[moonspinner]

yes! You are awesome and the queen of everything. Please update soon! Please!

But ooh, that makes me so happy you noticed those things!

It's the mark of great storytellingthat it rewards re-reading. :D