fic: storm born - chapter twenty-nine

Aug 22, 2010 20:53

Title: Storm Born
Author: Morgen
Summary: It was supposed to be their one chance to be together.  Instead it plunged them straight into a nightmare.
Disclaimer: I don't own LOTS or profit from it in any way.  Just worship it from afar.
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fanfic, storm born, legend of the seeker

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morgenwrites August 23 2010, 01:57:25 UTC
SPOT FOR THE BDAY GIRL BECAUSE SHE WANTS TO BE FIRST AND IS GONE AWAY TODAY.

SO HERE YOU GO, VAHALLALALALA. HAPPY BDAY. <33333

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valhallalilly August 25 2010, 04:11:11 UTC
AWWWWW I GET A SPOT THANK YOU! I was so excited to read this too! i just wanted to sneak off and be able too.

DEVOTIONNNNNN hee. Love that!

He kept his sword out, kept the blade angry
random line likage. I like that wording.

Richard gathered up Kahlan’s face in his hands. “I will always come for you,” he promised. “Always.”
Aww this line makes me happy. HE BETTER COME FOR HER

OH I LOVE that you added that bit with Cara. Dang you are SO good at tying things back up! I love that. Cara needed that too and I like her all proud like a 4 year old all beaming.

And smushy happiness with R and K! It's good R is finally accepting the title and K saying he should. I liked that exchange a lot. I just want to squish them both! Poor bb's so worried about each other.

ALSO BACK PAIN IS A BAD SIGN K BAAAD SIIIIGN OH NOES.
“My men and I have sword allegiance to Lord Rahl,” said Nox<--sworn

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morgenwrites August 27 2010, 12:35:34 UTC
YAY YOU GET A SPOT LALALA!

I LOVES the devotion in the books. I'm so glad you love it here!!!

Hehe. R and his sword are very angry.

He WILL. I PROMISE. It is ALWAYS his plan.

Cara is so adorbs when she secretly smiles and has feelings.

K knows all about titles. She has to be telling R that it's okay and he can do it.

BACK PAIN IS BAD. POSSIBLY IT IS A SIGN OF THINGS TO COME WITH THEIR WEE BABBY.

Ooh, ty for the beta bb

TY FOR READING! <3333 YOU!

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it's an epic valalalalala birthday party comment pickgems August 23 2010, 02:00:33 UTC
HAPPY BIRTHDAY VALALALALALALALALA! MEET MR. SPARKLE~ IT'S THE ONLY SPARKLE IN THIS POST

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Re: it's an epic valalalalala birthday party comment morgenwrites August 23 2010, 02:38:40 UTC
OMG SPARKLY ONE, 16 EDITS!!! MY INBOX IS DEADED GOOD. BIG FONT IS BIG. SPARKLES ARE SPARKLY.

AND HAPPY BIRTHDAY VAHALLALALALALALALA WHERE IS YOUR CAKE?

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Re: it's an epic valalalalala birthday party comment pickgems August 23 2010, 02:43:03 UTC

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Re: it's an epic valalalalala birthday party comment morgenwrites August 23 2010, 03:11:59 UTC
OMG SPARKLE STAR CAKE. THAT IS EXCELLENT. HERE I FOUND YOU A SPARKLY CUPCAKE. ONLY MAYBE VALALALA IS SUPPOSED TO EAT IT SINCE IT'S HER BDAY IDK.


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virkatjol August 23 2010, 02:00:33 UTC
MINE

Richard stopped short. “You know where we dwell?”

Nox beamed with pride. “My scouts are excellent.” He spread his huge arms wide. “This is D’Hara. Not a grain of sand sits here that we do not know.”

I Love everything up to this but I decided to just quote this cause I love that R and everyone is like ~hiding and they aren't really, but they still left them alone. They don't kill BBs. THAT IS GOOD DO NOT WANT K AND R'S BB TO BE DEADED.

Her pace was far less than a run, but he knew how hard it was for her to move even as fast as she did. She alone paid no attention to the army behind him, but scrambled down the rocks and straight into his arms.

OMG I LOVE HER WANTING TO HELP HIM!! Also she's not pissed at him yet, she's just worried. Poor K!! Seeing her man all bloody and cut. :(

“You nearly sent her into labor,” said Cara, “when she awoke and found you gone.”

Richard gathered up Kahlan’s face in his hands. “I will always come for you,” he promised. “Always.”TOO BAD HE DIDN'T I WANTS BABBY NAO!!!!!! heee Also Awww poor K so ( ... )

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pickgems August 23 2010, 02:31:48 UTC
agreed. needs more sex, yo.

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morgenwrites August 23 2010, 03:27:06 UTC
Heee. Yes. R was thinking he and K were being all hide-y in the cave, but the D'Harans knew where they were and just let them have pretend hiding tiems. And they don't kill bbs. IT'S A SECRET BUT D'HARANS LOVE WEE BABBIES. SHHHHH!

K was SO worried about her R. She woke up and he was GONE, and she had freak out tiems with Zedd and Cara. And then he shows up half dead and all bloody. Dun, dun, dun!!

THE BB IS GOING TO START COMING VERRRRYYYY SOOOOON.

R is the very best at worrying about K. Especially when she does things like faint in his arms. He needs her to be okay!!!! ALSO HE LIKES WHEN HE CAN FIX THINGS WITH HUGGING.

AND THEN K GETS TO FIX THINGS TOO BY TOUCHING R'S CHESTY AREA AND TELLING HIM ABOUT HIS MANLY STRONGNESS. RAR!

Poor K was secretly very scared about getting attacked and losing their wee bb. But R is promising to keep her safe!!

TY SO MUCH BB!!! I WILL TRY TO SUPPLY YOU WITH MOAR IN THE REQUIRED NUMBER OF DAYS TO BE KEEPING YOUR INTEREST. <3333 YOU!

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anonymous August 23 2010, 02:23:42 UTC
Yay, a new chapter. And let me just say, I am sooooo relieved! Richard has help and he's okay and Kahlan's okay and he apologized to Zedd and Cara and stopped being so emotional. The tension was about to kill me! Now I can breathe until the next crisis.

But more importantly, what of his shredded shirt? Does this mean he'll have to go shirtless from now on?

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morgenwrites August 23 2010, 03:41:56 UTC
I'm so glad you enjoyed the update!! It was so nice to finally get Richard out of his pit of emo and even let him make friends lol.

Oooh, EXCELLENT point about the shredded shirt. It most likely means that this will now become a SHIRTLESS JOURNEY. XD

TY so much for reading and for the feedback!!

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confessorlove August 23 2010, 02:31:02 UTC
OMG YES!! THE D'HARANS WEREN'T BAD NEWS AND STUFFS!!! I'm SOOOOO Glad Richard has his army nao!!! Swearing loyalty and protecting him and K and the babby!!

Poor Kahlan worrying all about Richard and wanting the babby born nao. Don't worry K I'm sure the babby will be here in no time. And R needs to be taking her to the safe place in the city I can't pronounce so she can have the babby.

*hopes K will have the babby very soon*

AMAZING JOB AS ALWAYS MORGEN!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!! <3333333

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morgenwrites August 23 2010, 03:44:11 UTC
HAHA YES! THEY THINK RICHARD AND HIS SWORD ARE THE VERY BEST! And now he has an army and lots and lots of people to help him protect K and their wee babby.

Poor Kahlan has been worrying so much. And wanting to just have her babby already. She is going to go into labor VERY, VERY SOOOON.

Thanks for reading and commenting! <333

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confessorlove August 23 2010, 08:16:38 UTC
Well I guess D'Haran's are smarter than I give them credit for thinking R and the sword are the bestest!!

YEAH BABBY NEEDS TO BE COMING VERY SOON!! TBH her back pains made me very suspicious of labor very very soon js

No problem bb I am totes addicted to this fic lol <333333

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