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morganstuart

Facing Forward (Sherlock)

May 13, 2011 20:13

Title: Facing Forward
(2nd in the Sofie Series)
Author: Morgan Stuart
Fandom: Sherlock
Disclaimer: This universe does not belong to me; I'm just an appreciative visitor. I make no profit from this fan work.
Description: While John and Sherlock watch Sofie, someone else watches Lestrade.
Historian's Note: This is a direct sequel to "Mouth of ( Read more... )

sherlock, fan fiction, star wars the phantom menace, harry potter, the sofie series (sherlock)

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morganstuart May 14 2011, 17:31:09 UTC

Oh, thank you so much! I'm so very glad you liked it.

methylviolet10b May 14 2011, 01:05:09 UTC

*wibbles*

I think I might cry, too. And I also think I might have to jump up and down and pitch a fit if you don't write more in this series. ;-) (Okay, I wouldn't actually, but I might wibble some more. Big, sad-eyed, heartbroken little girl wibblies. Or maybe even puppy-eyed wibblies.)

Just lovely stuff, and I really can hear the show characters saying your lines.

morganstuart May 14 2011, 18:11:58 UTC

I can't handle puppy-eyed wibblies, so put them away right now! ;)

I'm so glad you found this to be moving and in character. Thanks so much for your lovely feedback! I never meant to start a series - for that matter, I hadn't planned the first story at all, it sort of forced itself on me - and so I was a bit nervous about writing this sequel. So it does my heart much good to know you still like Sofie and this 'verse. :) I wouldn't mind revisiting it again, so we'll see.

Thanks again for your kind comments! And please don't cry. *hugs*

methylviolet10b May 16 2011, 17:16:57 UTC

LOL - okay, no crying. Or puppy-eyed wibblies. Check. ;-)

I'll just vote very strongly for a continuation of this series, should the muse so strike you. And oh, I know about unintended series... Hang in there, and I look forward to seeing more writing from you. Hopefully soon. :-)

dominique012 May 14 2011, 01:36:11 UTC

That is amazing! Perfect voices, funny, interesting. I loved it. :)

I loved this line:

“And thank you, by the way.” There was no mockery in his words, and Sherlock met his eyes for a heartbeat before inclining his head gravely, accepting the gratitude. So easy to imagine that.

And John and Lestrade talking about the gun. Perfect. Terrific fic!!

morganstuart May 14 2011, 18:13:01 UTC

This makes me so happy! Thanks so much for your feedback and for telling me what worked best for you (that's so helpful!). I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

bk7brokemybrain May 14 2011, 02:48:46 UTC

So much squee for daddies in danger and getting to blend Harry Potter and Sherlock. *swoons in happiness*
I'm really enjoying all the danger in this series. I hope you are inspired to keep going. Sofie is a great character.
Your John's voice sounds so much like MF's portrayal. Love that.

morganstuart May 14 2011, 18:15:04 UTC

Yay! You've put a huge smile on my face. I'm so glad the mashup between Sherlock and Harry Potter worked for you. It's great to hear that John's voice seems in character, too. I'm not ruling out more in this 'verse, so I appreciate knowing there's interest in more of Sofie and her series. Thanks a million for reading and for leaving such lovely feedback!

uwsannajane May 14 2011, 03:10:54 UTC

Oh, so much fun! This is insanely readable and weirdly in character, for everyone (even the blue nail polish on Sherlock). Plus unnerving and scary, without which it wouldn't be "Sherlock." Thank you!

morganstuart May 14 2011, 18:22:01 UTC

You've made me a very happy camper. Thanks so much! I'm so glad you liked it and felt it was both in character and scary (both of which were goals of mine). I really appreciate your reading and commenting.

PS. I'm wearing that 'Sea Spray' nail polish right this minute, as a matter of fact. ;)