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edom56 July 25 2010, 00:49:41 UTC
And you are breaking mine.

I feel so terrible for Sasha, and for Derek too, he so desperately wants to help her and do all the right things, and that's a really tall order right now.

Amazing chapter, even if it was heartbreakingly sad.

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gothabilly13 July 25 2010, 01:28:02 UTC
Thank you very much sweetie. It was a trying chapter to write. The up and down side to side of Sasha's emotions can be difficult to portray believably. I just hope it came out that way :P Thank you for r/r

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berryblue_girl July 25 2010, 02:48:16 UTC
*la sigh* My poor, poor Sasha! I will give a more detailed review over at your journal. *huggles Sasha doll*

Sarah

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gothabilly13 July 25 2010, 03:12:14 UTC
awwww....I know it was a really raw and emotional chapter *offers cookies*

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gothabilly13 July 25 2010, 03:54:32 UTC
Thank you doll! Yes it's going to be a difficult road. I hope I can keep the story flowing smoothly. Thank you for r/r :D

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rowena_dawson July 25 2010, 04:13:54 UTC
*sniff sniff* Oh poor Sasha...poor Derek...

I gotta say, that line about the little brave toaster smile made me giggle a little bit though.

Breaking my heart, one amazing story at a time.

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gothabilly13 July 25 2010, 08:43:33 UTC
wow thank you honey. I am sorry I'm breaking your heart. It will be raw for a while but i do promise happiness as wel. thanks for r/r

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niimura_shinya July 25 2010, 04:22:11 UTC
*Reaches for the tissues and wipes her eyes*

Once more, that took my breath away. The way you describe things almost makes me feel as if I was there. And this is something.

*Hugs*

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gothabilly13 July 25 2010, 08:50:35 UTC
*hugs* Thank you so very much lovebug. You made my night. I am sorry to make you sad but there will be good too. Thank you for r/r

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