S/H Zine Story: Achilles' Heel (NC-17)

Jan 04, 2009 21:02

Title: Achilles' Heel
Author: morganlogan
Pairing: S/H
Wordcount: 5,366
Rating: NC-17
Categories: FT, PWP, kink
Beta: Nik Ditty
Summary: Hutch can't help saying no.
Notes: A very early story of mine, this was my first ever accepted for publishing.
It appeared in Flamingo's Dangerous Lives, Dangerous Visions 2.

This one's for the Bird.

Achilles' Heel )

fiction, s/h, zinefic

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Comments 14

ancastar January 5 2009, 12:26:38 UTC
Wow. That was beautifully intense. I'll admit, a submissive Hutch and a =focused= Starsky is one of my absolute kinks, and you nailed it here.

Not unlike the way Starsk...

...you get my drift. ;-)

Thank you so much! What a way to start off my week.

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morganlogan January 7 2009, 00:42:11 UTC
Thanks! My favorite combo as well, obviously. :)

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silverngold64 January 5 2009, 13:48:17 UTC
It was just so right that Starsky had to give Hutch what he needed, even though he wasn't sure himself. Letting him say 'no' as much as he needed, and giving him his 'jalapeno' safe word was perfect! Always love the way you write these two. Thanks for sharing such a great story!

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morganlogan January 7 2009, 00:42:51 UTC
:) I'm so glad you enjoyed.

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sc_fossil January 5 2009, 13:48:21 UTC
Oh, man. This was hot. I love kink and you hit all my buttons with this. And the kiss coming after was a sweet touch.

The bed shifted, and then Starsky was leaning above him, staring down again, but this time from a mere foot away. Hutch looked into his eyes, fearing a possessive, triumphant look, but Starsky's expression was achingly soft, and with great tenderness he pushed the damp hair from Hutch's forehead.

I liked this paragraph. Hutch was expecting some manly ownership out of Starsky and instead, he got love.

Thanks!

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morganlogan January 7 2009, 00:43:13 UTC
hey cutie. thanks. love is always unexpected. :)

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annieb1955 January 5 2009, 22:24:41 UTC
OMG! This is unbearably hot and tender and lovely. Wonderful as always.

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morganlogan January 7 2009, 00:43:32 UTC
Thanks, annie! Your icon is hotness.

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morganlogan January 24 2009, 07:27:38 UTC
awww, thank you my pookie!

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