That was brilliant! You're definitely keeping us on our toes....90% of the chapter spent thinking hadley's a cruel bastard, the last part thinking perhaps there's method to his madness! Well done!
A gripping chapter! My heart goes out to Cameron--and while I loved seeing Hadley take care of him after the punishment, I'm hoping Cameron finds a way to keep some of his attitude; to keep something of himself. (Even if he learns to be more circumspect about showing that attitude.)
Cameron was a surprise when I started writing, I figured it would have been Daniel to step in it first. I'm becoming attached to all of them, even the girls who need to see some action ;)
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