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morgan72uk

New fic - The Last Time They Met

Jan 29, 2010 22:47

Title:The Last Time They Met
Author: Morgan72uk
Pairing: DeWitt/Dominic
Characters: DeWitt/ Dominic
Rating: G
Spoilers: Everything up to the end of season 2
Disclaimer: Not mine - regrettably.

A/N - this fic came out of nowhere. I think, to read it you have to assume that the scene in Getting Closer doesn't happen - and see this as an alternative. But I ( Read more... )

fic, rating: g, a: morgan72uk

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otahyoni January 29 2010, 23:45:51 UTC

How well betrayal becomes them.

Well, if that isn't them summed up completely in five neat little words, I don't know what is.

morgan72uk January 30 2010, 12:27:30 UTC

Thanks

ladyvivien January 30 2010, 08:32:46 UTC

oh, that was wonderful! dark, bitter and perfect (much like the lady herself).

morgan72uk January 30 2010, 12:28:30 UTC

Thanks.

miss_atom January 30 2010, 10:14:20 UTC

Even Topher at the height of his genius couldn't create someone with such greatness set against such devastating cruelty.

This is so true and beautiful.

I loved the whole thing ♥

morgan72uk January 30 2010, 12:28:57 UTC

Oh - thank you. I'm glad you liked it.

sheepfairy January 30 2010, 19:57:08 UTC

Ah, nice! I think it's a really interesting AU, and I like her interaction with Echo at the end.

morgan72uk January 31 2010, 16:37:06 UTC

Thanks - I'm glad you liked it. I really wanted to write a scene where they didn't talk - but just communicated, even if it was still all messed up

rogoblue January 30 2010, 23:23:59 UTC

So much going on w/o a word spoken between them. They see and acknowledge the best and worst in each other. What better basis upon which to build a relationship ... or destroy one. Wow.

morgan72uk January 31 2010, 10:06:52 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad you saw what I was getting at - all that they could be and all that they are and not a single word to each other.
There's also the sense that his freedom is hell anyway - and not just because, if you take it as cannon, the thoughtpocalypse happens anyway. In my happier moments I like believing that Echo is right.

rogoblue January 31 2010, 21:52:06 UTC

This one really spoke to me. I've read it a few times now and I think it's because it's so different from what I am comfortable writing. My stuff is dialogue driven. Always is. It's what I'm better at. I admire the ability (that I dont' have) to convey complicated stuff w/o words.

Your happier moments feel accurate to me. For what that's worth!

morgan72uk February 1 2010, 19:48:06 UTC

I really love your dialogue - and your ability to tell a story in one part, which I struggle with these days. Your stuff on ff.net is brilliant - all nuanced and witty, with hints of D/D. I like the way you write Dom as more than a glorified security guard - with staff and involvement with clients. It reads as how things would be.

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