FIC: Unguarded Moments

[morena_donn]

Title: Unguarded Moments
Author: morena_donn
Pairings : Lorne/Zelenka established, mention of unrequited Sheppard/McKay.
Rated: Light R
Word Count: 2600
Summary: John sees something he shouldn’t.

Brilliantly beta’d by brindel

Comments

[morena_donn]

Glad you liked. I was pretty fond of that line myself!

[tobimonkee]

Awww Lorne and Zelenka kissing in the gateroom so cute and "naked stargazing" lol

[morena_donn]

Glad you liked. The gateroom kiss was actually one of the first snippets that popped into my head when I started this.

[goddess47]

"Naked stargazing" ::snorfle::

Fun and cute!

[morena_donn]

Glad you liked. I was pretty fond of that line myself!

[altyronsmaker]

Oooh fun! and dammit! I was so hoping Rodney WASN'T oblivious, but um, perhaps another snippet? With John getting hwat he so obviously wants?

And I third or fourth the notion that nakes stargazing is, like, the best euphamism ever! FTW!

[morena_donn]

Glad you liked. My beta was also hoping for a less oblivious Rodney. THis was my first completed fic in two years - hopefully the writers block will stay smashed and I can provide one in a companion piece.

[aqualegia]

"Naked stargazing" It's a good thing I wasn't drinking when I read that ROFL... I'd like to see what happens when Rodney eventually catches a clue... and John get his man.

[morena_donn]

Glad you liked. And I'm working on a companion piece. Stay tuned...