Comments | morena_donn: New FIC Lessons

morena_donn

New FIC Lessons

Mar 01, 2006 21:24

Author: Morena Donn
Title: Lessons
Pairing, etc. McKay/Sheppard, First Time, PG-13

Summary: Let's just say "ridiculously attractive people in absurd situations " and leave it at that.

Written as a bit if Valentine's Day Cotton Candy (all sugar and no substance) for my beloved beta brindel, who has once again proved that with enough polishing, even fluff ( Read more... )

fic, sga

Comments 18

brindel March 2 2006, 16:19:47 UTC

Posted! Yay!

Like the new title, it works. *g*

morena_donn March 2 2006, 18:00:48 UTC

Yes, well I dotched the first because really, there's a limit to the amount of "cute" one story can handle, and the second felt too much like an inside joke.

*still can't believe how many rewrites it took to produce such a simple piece of fluff*

diluvian March 2 2006, 18:16:18 UTC

Hee!

morena_donn March 2 2006, 19:23:31 UTC

That about sums it up! Glad you liked it, and thanks for commenting.

tagetes March 2 2006, 19:56:08 UTC

Lovely! *bg*

morena_donn March 2 2006, 20:41:58 UTC

*grins back* Glad you liked it, and thanks for commenting!

torakowalski March 2 2006, 21:47:42 UTC

"You have the most beautiful mouth I’ve ever seen," Rodney breathes. "I really want to kiss you."

I really, really, really like that line.

morena_donn March 2 2006, 22:18:13 UTC

Oh, me too. And JF *does* have the most beautiful mouth I've ever seen, and *I* really want to kiss it, or would want to, anyway, if we weren't both inconveniently married to other people!

Also, icon love. Punk!Rodney *sigh* *goes to happy place*

panisdead March 2 2006, 21:58:20 UTC

Hee! That's really surprisingly sexy. :)

morena_donn March 2 2006, 22:21:31 UTC

It is, isn't it? I can't really take any credit though - DH and JF both have such lovely, sexy mouths, anything that focuses on them is going to be sexy.

Glad you liked, and thanks for commenting!