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jedibuttercup May 27 2010, 08:10:05 UTC
You've got some pretty good first lines, too!

I tend to get a little wordy, when I'm not trying to open Dramatically. =)

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moragmacpherson May 29 2010, 02:42:50 UTC
I seem to suffer from indefinite pronoun use. I guess I'm trying for in media res? Or maybe I'm just lazy. I still think your set wins.

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