Beyond the Sea [prologue]

Sep 21, 2010 09:47

There was no need to look at the name of the ship - he knew in his heart, in his belly, what the name of it was. “The Nocturne,” he whispered hoarsely.

“Well?” murmured a man from behind expectantly. “What are you waiting for?”

Author Notes: I was surprised to see a strong lack of total crack with Kradam pirates... thought I should fix that. I  ( Read more... )

kradam: bts

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saar_fantasy September 21 2010, 15:08:59 UTC
I like it!

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mooquackingcow September 21 2010, 17:17:25 UTC
Thank you! C:

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kira_dark_wing September 21 2010, 16:02:48 UTC
... *looks around like a lost kitten* where's the rest? More will be coming soon, yes?

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mooquackingcow September 21 2010, 17:18:10 UTC
Of course xDD I'll try and get one chapter out a week. C: Glad you like it!

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akavertigo September 21 2010, 16:09:08 UTC
Iiiiiiiiiiintriguing.

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mooquackingcow September 21 2010, 17:18:27 UTC
Thaaaaaaaaaank you. xDDD <3

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wikken September 21 2010, 16:26:36 UTC
mooquackingcow September 21 2010, 17:18:55 UTC
I probably should >3< I'll get on that~
But thank you for the comment! C:

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chil33 September 21 2010, 16:36:40 UTC
Wow! I love the story and your writing style, and your imagery is beautiful & evocative. Would LOVE to beta for you--I've never done it for fanfiction but I was an editor for my college newspaper. Currently I only deal with my husband's papers, but he's getting his Master's in English & is teaching composition to college students and he finds my input helpful :)

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mooquackingcow September 21 2010, 17:20:41 UTC
Hey, I'm an English major too! 8D A beta would be awesometastic. I need better transitions and such :\ so yes, feel free to shoot me a note and I'll give you my contact info! <3

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