Lift me up. Oneshot.

[pjlover666]

Title: Lift me up
Rating: PG13
Universe: Bayverse
Summary: Why do we keep hitting ourselves with a hammer repeatedly? Because it feels so good when we finally stop. Prowl and Jazz couldn't agree more.
Disclaimer: I don't own these characters.
Warnings: None
Word count: ~900
AN: One of my few takes from Prowl's POV. He is just so hard for me. Thank you silberstreif

Comments

[gracesolo]

Oh my goodness...your wonderful Prowl/Jazz strikes again!! I am forever in absolute awe of how well you capture this pairing, will managing to keep them in character! Please continue the great work, and message me when you get a minute to spare from your studies!

Hugs and cookies lady!!

[pjlover666]

*blushes* Lol, thanks a lot dear! I never imagined that this would turn out this way. Would you believe that the bunny was actually humorous, but once I started writing from Prowl's POV... I'm gonna try write some more from his POV to get the hang of it ^^ Thank you so much again! *hugs tight*

[zea_taylor]

That was lovely. I adore the way you wrote these two, keeping both in character and managing to make this so sweet and touching, despite the brutal reality of their lives. Thanks for sharing!

[pjlover666]

Thank you so much! I think this is the 'most in character' that I've ever wrote these two. It was so exciting writing this from Prowl's POV. ^^ I'm really glad you liked it!

[mmouse15]

That was terrific. Great job of showing how hard it is for Prowl to send Jazz out on these types of missions.

[pjlover666]

Thank you!
It really is incredibly hard on them both and it's amazing how they find the straight to do this again and again and again... that's what I love about this pairing ^^ I'm glad you liked it!

[sideslip_tf]

Yep, sometimes there is nothing to say.

[pjlover666]

Yes, sometimes, especially for Prowl and Jazz, words aren't enough to capture their true feelings. :)

[bluebirdsoaring]

Prowl hates his job...it kills him each and every day...the way you build up to that moment of tension and then fill it with a kiss which speaks so much more loudly than his mixed up words - brilliant!! Jazz hates his job too -knowing his team will likely be all dead, perhaps him too - just for info on that datapad - so much to say, no words to say it...perfect!!

[pjlover666]

Thank you, I'm glad that you liked it! ^^ It's slowly killing them both, this war sucking out the life from them... it's amazing how they don't simply give up and how selfless they are. This is why I love this pairing :)