Comments | moonstruck88: Wait For Me, a House/Cam angst in 3 parts

moonstruck88

Wait For Me, a House/Cam angst in 3 parts

Aug 31, 2006 05:19

Rating: R
Summary: To sit on the roof with a gun and a girl, puzzling at the color of the world.

After sitting on the roof in the rain tonight, the words finally came. And I wrote them down. Thanks to princessklutz04 for letting me bounce if off her.

( Wait For Me )

Comments 25

uhhh yeah I think this is the one I am voting for... diagnosticmad September 4 2006, 04:35:18 UTC

I don't know if you know but this piece has been nominated in the fan fic awards and so I think I am voting for this one...

This is the second time I have read it and I really think its just wonderfully done...very emotionally charged... I love the color metaphors and that desperation in Cameron...

as far as who you're friend is...I hope he is at peace.

Re: uhhh yeah I think this is the one I am voting for... moonstruck88 September 4 2006, 04:48:03 UTC

I'm honored to have your vote. I was feeling a bit insecure when I saw who I'm up against... *is nervous* Thanks again, diagnosticmad.

Re: uhhh yeah I think this is the one I am voting for... diagnosticmad September 4 2006, 18:21:01 UTC

Believe me when I say that I have read all the entries and in terms of angst and what might possibly happen on the show...yours was the best...sorry but I even loved "Sinned" by cathiexx and "This Lonely View" by snark bait is excellent...but I didn't think the piece was that angsty enough...yours was overflowing with angst...

So you at least got one vote here...please read my piece in the Work in Progress category...its called Insomnia...I would love some feedback!

... a_red_sun_rises September 7 2006, 00:37:12 UTC

so... ive read everyone elses comments, and they all talked about crying... YOU know how hard this was for me to read... and ill leave it at that... <3

Re: ... moonstruck88 September 7 2006, 01:02:50 UTC

I know. It was hard to write. But I felt like I had to. I vent through my writing. I miss him, as you do, and we're still in those painful weeks that follow the disaster... I'm not sure the pain will ever go away, and I'm not sure I want it to.

I think we'll always remember. Phillip was... As God made him. And I will leave it at that.

Anyway, thanks for reading. I'm sorry it was hard.

chilibreath September 19 2006, 02:19:41 UTC

Excellent.

My late and sincere condolences for your friend.

moonstruck88 September 19 2006, 02:34:34 UTC

Thank you. I miss him :(

biases October 9 2006, 12:06:55 UTC

A very interesting story! Nicely written, well done!

elizabethswan_ October 11 2006, 05:09:53 UTC

I am so sorry.

Gorgeous fiction. Very powerful emoting. Loved the symbolism.