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Aug 20, 2005 05:45

First fic done for 14_lyrics (everyone join, like, now. There is Ted Leo and Ben Folds in the challenges. How can you lose.) It is, predictably, Bleach. Pre-series. Shameless 'how they met' speculation. Answer: Not so cute.

Theme 1: Where's my home, sir? )

hisana eats babies, kuchiki, bleach, fic

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bravecows August 20 2005, 10:43:43 UTC
Answer: Not so cute.

I think there might be something wrong with my brain, then, because it is going OMG SO CUTE SO CUTE. Theatrics in the rain! Umbrella! Raindrops on Byakuya's nose! (Hee, "hawk-like". Hee, he has a big nose.)

And god, Hisana, with her knife-sharp humility -- should she have danced for her sorrows, squee. An' an' their dialogue! They are just like Elizabeth and Darcy except with more kowtowing on her part and less sekrit gooshiness on his.

(Byakuya said "ho"! And not in a way related to gardening or prostitution or even Santa Claus! omg best fic EVAR.)

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memlu August 20 2005, 15:08:47 UTC
I choose to believe this is exactly how it happened in canon, yes. I seem to do that a lot when reading your fic! Such is art, etc.

In any case, ahhhhhh. I love your Byakuya and Hisana as much as I love everything else you write, which is a great deal and occasionally marked by incoherent squealing when new fic arrives. And oh boy, I squealed lots reading this. This is wonderful and, you know, after reading bravecows comment I'm never going to be able to think of them without thinking of Pride and Prejudice.

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furato August 20 2005, 16:08:44 UTC
You. Should. Be. Canonised.

Really, if Kubo doesn't write more about Mr White and Ms Red in the future, your them will be canon in my head. *_*

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roark28 August 20 2005, 19:47:09 UTC
That it is so pretty. I have a secret plan that if I ever have a kazillion dollars I'll start an animation studio which animates all of your scenes cuz they are just incredibly cool. Mind telling which songs are in this one? I haven't listened to much by either so I am not sure. Thanks =)

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tarigwaemir August 21 2005, 12:25:45 UTC
Your Byakuya and Hisana are always so perfect. Wah! *_*

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