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ex_capriccio230 November 23 2003, 20:03:03 UTC
I freaking love you. All the tiny details, the fact that it's Orochimaru who speaks, and it all seems to serve as a sort of foreshadowing.... mwar.

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moonsheen November 24 2003, 14:26:05 UTC
Hmm. 'Be' by Hiasobi (found on ff.net) is a nice Hinata fic, I always thought. And of course, then there's

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GEH. moonsheen November 24 2003, 14:27:57 UTC
ng's. As in livejournal user: ng. Proof that I should not muck around with tags in the morning, right there. Gyah.

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dinghy November 25 2003, 08:06:59 UTC
I don't comment nearly enough on your fic but I really do love to read it. This piece especially, man. I like the tone, sort of middle ground between emotional and removed in describing what is the everyday combat and death around them. It's short but very nicely done, doesn't need anymore.

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hemlocke November 26 2003, 11:35:36 UTC
What a killer last line. It's a great way of giving some background to Orochimaru's utter fear and dislike for death, resulting later in his later warped researches. Another short but effective writing. See, fanfics don't have to span generations for it to be good. *coughs thinking about other fandoms*

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enarte June 7 2004, 13:43:47 UTC
that is just gorgeous. :O

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