The Back Of Things

[moonrakerz]

Perhaps it is too difficult to interpret. But these are the very words that came out of my head and reflected my momentary emotions. Some friends told me my poems are too cryptic to understand. Maybe I don't want to be understood, just heard. Perhaps the accompanying picture which I shot a couple of days ago at some back alley in Chinatown will

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[soveren]

in a moment
a word, a sentence
everything changes
becomes an eternity

[moonrakerz]

As if sleeping is a norm
waking up in the middle of the night is not.
As if eternity is infinite
changes are a constant.

[soveren]

the slumber of the deep
breaking waves
shattering hearts
erasing futures end

[neuy]

eternity is but a promise
which dies off at the junction of the y,
in a mindful of oily thoughts
insatiated with tragic notions of bliss;

[empress_miyu]

The photo is very evocative......an ending, a beginning....somewhere in between a dream and waking.

Good poetry, in my opinion is always a little cryptic. It leaves room for the reader to find himself in the lines.

[moonrakerz]

That's an interesting observation, Ben.

Now, if only I can write about my being in between jobs.
Tough life for me at the moment...

[empress_miyu]

SOmetimes the tough times make for good writing. And if you need ANYTHING, please let me know and I'll do whatever I can.

[moonrakerz]

SOmetimes the tough times make for good writing.
Yes indeed. I do agree with the former.

Thank you for offering, Ben. Your words of wisdom/comfort should suffice.. *hugs*

[fatcat75]

I understand.

It's has never been the end...

Many storms would come
Many wars would be made
Only if...
The warriors would remain.