Each little section of the poem, is a work all of it's own. Individual, they are very interesting and could evoke several different thoughts. Together, they paint a picture of a young man, who has traveled, happy about the future, while , at the back of his mind he wonders.....
It's good to hear from you Vincent. And that picture....are you trying to make me hot? It is the winter here, but suddenly I see steam. :)
Do write me and let me know your new address. I have things to send!! :D
And happy 26th birthday. I thought about sending an e-card tomorrow(still 17th here), but I didn't want to seem trite, e-cards are so impersonal.
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And I don't know how to appreciate poetry :P
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How come you're deleting your journal?
Everything ok there?
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Age is amazingly catching up.. I'm really shocked!
Perhaps I'm still living with the past..
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enjoy matey
many happy returns!
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26 is so close to the BIG3. *sobs*
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It's good to hear from you Vincent. And that picture....are you trying to make me hot? It is the winter here, but suddenly I see steam. :)
Do write me and let me know your new address. I have things to send!! :D
And happy 26th birthday. I thought about sending an e-card tomorrow(still 17th here), but I didn't want to seem trite, e-cards are so impersonal.
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Glad you could feel what I felt when I wrote it.
Aren't you grately I'm making you all warm and snuggly in the cold winter? *grins*
I have just replied your last e-mail.. heh heh..
Thanks so much, Ben.. e-cards are indeed so impersonal.
Handmade cards shoot the moon! :þ
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