My Best, My Worst.

[moonrakerz]

My Best, My Worst
by Vincent Lai

I am at my best
when you're by my side.
I am at my worst
when I don't feel you inside.

•~ Dedicated to my love, Dios Vincoy Jr. who inspired me.~•

Comments

[chancellor_wu]

I like that. It's so sweet.

I think I would float away with the clouds should someone I love write something so simple and tender to me!

[moonrakerz]

*blush blush* it came from deep inside..
It just popped out naturally when I wrote it as part of a mail message.

You can pretend this is meant for you until he comes? :þ

[chancellor_wu]

Hee hee. I will pretend. And it makes me feel better.

I think sometimes the most beautiful things are written on the spur of the moment. I am a poor poet, but once, I wrote a fatastic verse in the cover of a book I gave to a friend. It just seemed to appear on the page. But when I try to write poems, they sound forced.

[moonrakerz]

He he.. I am glad it makes you feel better.
It makes me happy to see you and everyone else happy.

Exactly. Somehow, it'd just come out right, sounding good.
But it really depends on mood. Mostly. At least in my case, it does..
I think it's quite ironic that we could almost not write good stuff when we try to do it forcefully.
It'd really be scary wouldn't it when you depend on it for living!

[neuy]

you two have come a looooooong way! :)

regards to benni too ;)

[moonrakerz]

*blushes*

[youngwolf2k]

"when I don't feel you inside."

feel what inside? *giggles*

[moonrakerz]

He he.. it's really up to your interpretation! :þ *smacks Colin silly*

[abdaziz]

Actually I have the same thoughts when I read the poem. I was like hmmmmmm... ;)

[moonrakerz]

Hahaha... well, well.. poems are always for you to interpret.
JUST LIKE ART. *winks*

[moonrakerz]

will it give you diabetis? :P I hope not.

[runecircle]

nice

[moonrakerz]

Thank you.. nice is good. :)