An Ornamental Past Contained

[moonrakerz]

Big brother Vincent [ /?fit4ltr ] wrote a poem called Photographs in his profile. I got inspired to react to that poem he wrote. This poem below is my reaction to his.

An Ornamental Past Contained
by Vincent Lai •~ moonrakerz ~•
Things you won't let go

Comments

[neuy]

a hangover and the day after
empty bottles of memories contained
oldnewspaper man so mishandled
spilled pains, sorrows, broken heart
three feet under watered tears
perhaps a brighter day shall bloom...

[junichi_08]

A symphonious poem, indeed. Have you studied some course on Eng Literature before?

[moonrakerz]

I studied English up till Form 5.
It's just DIY from then onwards.. ;Þ

[soveren]

tis a natural gift for the beauty u create with each line