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moonlightrick October 21 2008, 05:44:54 UTC
And perhaps did fit a Wookiee? Maybe she stole it from Chewie.

Haha, either him, Lowie, or Kyp :P

“She’s all yours,” Beryl told Zekk before heading into the back.
“Wuss,” said the heater.
LOL. XD

I was inordinately fond of that part, so thanks ;D

LOL again. She is quite tiny. She probably comes up to Zekk’s armpits.

I know, right? I actually checked her height in the database while writing this--and she's *really* short. Like...4'8 or so? And of course Zekk is so *tall*, especially compared to her :P

Ah, this is so perfectly done. Jaina may be older, but she still has some of that uncertainty about relationships that she showed in YJK, along with her fierce belief in Zekk. It’s obvious that she feels so strongly about him precisely because she can’t say how she feels, if that makes any sense.Thank you! It makes perfect sense, actually, and it's very much what I'm aiming for. There are additional factors on her side, that would be explored a bit in the possible sequel, but as an outgrowth of canon hints. And you're dead on with ( ... )

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southernrogue47 October 15 2008, 01:25:27 UTC
Just a teeny bit more candy and they will out-sweet Lera/Nichyn. (Yay for Imogen/The Walk cut!lyrics!) I love how Jaina isn't doing the mushy stuff. It's weird when she gets mushy.

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moonlightrick October 21 2008, 05:48:23 UTC
Well, they'll *try*, but Lera/Nichyn is a pretty long-standing sweet :P (<3 Imogen/The Walk) Haha, I'm not of a mushy writer, so that works ;D

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anonymous October 16 2008, 01:32:01 UTC
Jon here, Erin.

Sweeter than Lera/Nichyn? Is that possible? ;)

Good post, here. Well, okay. Great post.

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moonlightrick October 21 2008, 05:50:29 UTC
I didn't say they'd manage it, but they seem to be trying ;p (And really, no, not possible :P)

thanks :D

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