The Man in the Mirror

[moonchildfic]

Title: The Man in the Mirror
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Eliot, Nate, mentions of team
Verse:
Fandoms: Leverage
Summary: Concerning the Last Dam Job, Things Sophie Said, and the Night After.
Notes: Major Spoilers for the Last Dam Job.

Comments

[yanzadracan]

*claps* I like.

[moonchildfic]

Thanks!

[blcknite]

You voice Eliot so perfectly, all grace and brutality creating a poetic juxtaposition. It is like reading a peek into the mind of the character that CK has built. Write a book, because I could read your stories all day.

[moonchildfic]

A juxtaposition of grace and brutality... I think that's the best description of Eliot I've heard in quite a while. I like it.

Thanks for the vote of confidence on the writing front. If only publishers/agents agreed.

[andrea_ze]

I like----a lot.
Thanks.

[moonchildfic]

Thanks!

[deepbluemermaid]

Oh, I love this! Great insight into Eliot's troubles, showing just how far he's come in four years, and a very interesting conversation with Nate too.

Minor typo alert: run heard on Parker and Hardison should be 'herd'.

[moonchildfic]

Weirdly I've been on this "Showing how far he's come" kick since I was writing another of my stories and was like "Actually, he'd probably realize by now they'd have his back. He'd be disturbed by it, but he'd know it... awesome!".

It feels weirdly like realizing my neice is in first grade when I look back at how much these guys have *grown*.

*is off to fix the typo* Thanks!

[hollymac_79]

Wow!! I love this!! great insight into both Nate and Eliot.

[moonchildfic]

Thanks! This episode really begged for tags, glad it turned out well.

And I approve of your icon.