Breathe

[moonchildfic]

Title: Breathe
Author: Magpie
Rating: pg-13
Genre: Werewolf!Eliot, Eliot/OMC, pre-Nate/Eliot/Sophie
Verse: Phases of the Moon
Summary: He's standing at the door, wondering how he got here, and just telling himself to breathe.
Notes: For the Domestic Abuse: Physical square on my H/c bingo card.
Warnings: Deals with and contains mildly graphic

Comments

[lmx_v3point3]

\o/

I will come back in a couple of hours when I've stopped crying and leave a proper review. For now, a 'hurrah' will have to do.

[moonchildfic]

lol, I take it you liked it. Sorry for the hours of crying though. I didn't mean for it to be *that* sad.

[lmx_v3point3]

It's alright, I've come to expect it. I was braced.

You guide emotions really well, it's a step by step process and you hold the reader's hand all the way. It builds and builds and doesn't really break you down until things start to turn around. Like many things, you don't realise how bad things were until you start to see the light on the other side. It makes for beautiful reading, and I'm looking forward to going back and reading this whole story through when it's complete.

I'm running short on descriptors for your fic in general. I will fall back on wow, awesome, and yay!

[cata_clysmiic]

This is super interesting.

[moonchildfic]

Thanks!

[ziplocless]

I haven't read the rest of this verse, I've missed a lot over the summer, but if the rest is anything like this piece it's incredible.

I love the way you broke the Alpha -Beta bond, that the team did their research and knew precisely how they could beat Jacob. And I loved Eliot's realization that they were his pack even when he was human. All the emotions are so complex and true to character.

Above all, I adore that Nate and Sophie are now Eliot's Alphas.

[moonchildfic]

Hey, I think welcome backs might be in order here!

Well I just updated the master list so you can now read this entire verse in order (which will make it make a bit more sense).

Yeah I pretty much started with the bond breaking scene in badass form and just had to figure out how to *get there*

Thanks for the review!

[deanangst]

Oh poor Eliot. I'm glad he was able to see he needed to break away from jacob. I was afraid he'd be dragged into the very relationship he witnessed with his mother and that man. (yes your verses are canon in my head)

I loved how the team knew without being told and were just waiting for ELiot to make his choice. But loved loved loved Nates oath/pledge and Sophie and Nates claiming of Eliot.

I can't wait to see more. I just love thsgt the you let the team take care of not only eliots physical needs when hes hurt but his emotional/mental needs when hes confused and tired.

did you see the moon tonight...its big and pretty..

HOWLLLLLL i'm a wolf trapped in a PDF body :)

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[moonchildfic]

I hope the PDF are happy because now I really want to write a story about Eliot and the cycle of violence continueing and him getting into an abusive relationship and getting stuck there because he is *used* to the abuse.

*will not write a mirror verse scene from Black King White Knight. I will *not* write a fic called "White King Black Knight" I will... mah hell, I'll put it on my to do list*

Btb have you read LMX's A Time to Disapear which was written using my verse! (with permission and much fangirling on my part) and is made of win and should have more reviews saying so.

And yeah, one of the things I decided was important going into this was that the team would know but they wouldn't activly intervine until Eliot reached out. They know him well enough to know it won't do them any good until he's realized he has to get the hell out.

The moon is pretty here as well, you poor confused werefrog.

[deanangst]

oh I haven read it, cool that gives me something to look foward to for the weekend :)

eek did i add fuel the fire for the new/minor verse? I'd never want to do that insert evil grin. I honestly think I'd read and enjoy a phone book if you wrote it. Oh man, yeah i can see Eliot falling into that trap, the emotional scars that were left behind as a child/teen being played on.
Nate and the gang being there for him, Parker wanting to steal him back, Eliot so confused that hes not sure if there is anything left worthy to steal....fans flames...

Whats Adrian up to?????

It's hard being a furry werefrog. Everytime I try to turn someone my poison does them in. I guess I'll have to settle for a Pack....of chips, but i doubt they will survive the evening either.

[moonchildfic]

I think you may have misread that. I did not say Minor Verse. I said Mirror Verse (as in, I am showing I have some geek cred with a Stark Trek Refference). Anyway what I was thinking is I may end up, just for the heck of it, writing a short fic where the premise is basically Black King/White Knight (and probably set in season one, or maybe two) where Nate becomes abusive toward Eliot.

Afterall Nathan Ford is not a nice man and he does have a capacity for violence.

My mind, it is a frightening place.

Hardison gave Adrian a I-touch with about a dozen word find apps downloaded onto it along with several broadway musicals and a refrigerator full of Diet Pepsi Max to keep her entertained while I worked on other fics.

Hey! You could turn me. I'm immune to your poison remember? I always wanted to be a werewolf!

[deanangst]

Fanfic will be our alpha....and angst.. And hurt comfort..and alll things that allow us to scuff eliot and nurse him back to health. Yes it will be a good alpha and we must heed it's call.

It is the wereplotbunny afterall.

Does a little froggy dance and darts away.