H50 - Rather Swim Ashore

[moogsthewriter]

Apparently Danny’s not supposed to like Hawaii.

Every time he finds something he can appreciate about living on the island, something else comes along to counteract it.

Example one: Seeing Grace more. It’s fantastic, really, and it’s the reason he moved out here in the first place. Dealing with Rachel and Step-Stan, though? Annoying as hell, but

Comments

[settiai]

Oh, this was awesome. ♥

[moogsthewriter]

Thanks! :D Glad you liked.

[donutsweeper]

Oh I love the last two lines, the way they tie together the whole fic!

[moogsthewriter]

Thanks so much! :D It's nice to know those little touches are appreciated.

[faye_dartmouth]

You are just so awesome.

This fic is just so awesome.

The entire premise, your grasp of Danny's voice, the flow of it. And the subtlety of it--the way Danny's thoughts get shorter and more fragmented as his awareness wanes. It isn't explicit but it gets the point across. That's one of those neat showing but not telling things that isn't always easy to pull off.

And have I mentioned how awesome this is?

[moogsthewriter]

HEEEEEE.

<3

Have I mentioned how awesome you are?

I'm super glad you liked this. Super glad you beta'd it, too. :) You're just made of that much awesome, so it's nice that you spread it around. ^_^

[kelly_girl]

Great fic. I really liked this.

[moogsthewriter]

Thanks so much! :D Glad you enjoyed it.

[serenity_pen]

Very good story and well written. I love all of Danny's lists! hee hee.

[moogsthewriter]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. Those lists were quite fun to come up with, especially the ones about his near-death experiences on the team. :D Thanks for the feedback!