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[lightofeilia]

Username: lightofeilia
Class: Monk
Title: Apocalypse
Summary: Um. I just spent half an hour trying to come up with one. Figures the one time I come up with a title I can't come up with a summary
Characters/Pairings: Squall Leonhart, Rinoa Heartilly, Ellone (Loire?)
Word count: 931
Rating/warnings: Um... nothing major, one swear word.

Comments

POINTS

[breyzyyin]

37 Points to Team Monk!

...Wow, just wow. I'm always amazed when I read your fan fics, and this one is no exception. You wrote a really dark story here, and you wrote it masterfully...I loved the description and how each piece of the story was connected to one another through the quotations. I thought it was a really original fic, actually...and it showcased how dark a lot of the anti-Sorceress sentiments could possibly be if they'd been explored a bit more in the game itself (I imagine that would be rather dark and would make for very tragic outcomes if explored more closely given how people were supposed to fear the Sorceresses in the game's world). And a really good insight into the cyclical nature of FFVIII's plot given the emphasis on time there is in that game. :D Excellent job, truly! ♥

Re: POINTS

[lightofeilia]

thanks! You just made my day with your wonderful comment :D

[breyzyyin]

I really liked this! I think you captured the darkness of the plot really well, especially in the quotes. Great job! ♥

[lightofeilia]

Thanks breyzy :D

[fromherashes]

Creeeeepy. I like.

[lightofeilia]

XD i'm glad you like it.