{Fan Fic} Chaos and Order

[breyzyyin]

Username: Yin (of breyzyyin)
Class: White Mage
Title: Chaos and Order
Summary: After a rather harsh encounter, the Warrior of Light has a conversation that leads him to better understand one of his newer comrades.
Characters/Pairings: The Warrior of Light from the Dissidia: Final Fantasy games. Zafina from the Tekken series.
Notes: My second ever attempt

Comments

[breyzyyin]

POINTS

64 Points to Team White Mage!

[breyzyyin]

Aw, thank you so much! :)

I really like that aspect of the Dissidia story concept too (haha, if I hadn't had that leeway for a potential crossover fic...I'm not sure if I would have been able to write one, orz XD), so I'm glad that you thought I handled that idea really well with the contrast between the two of them. :D

Haha, truthfully...I'm not the biggest WoL fan either (he's just...not a character I really think much on when it comes to Dissidia musings a lot of the time), so I was sort of surprised when I'd originally had the Tekken/Dissidia fic idea that the one aspect of it that stayed with me was the idea that I wanted to have a conversation between him and Zafina at some point in it. XD I ended up having fun writing the piece though, and I'm glad that you thought I managed to get a good sense of his character in it--I have a harder time writing from his perspective at times, so I'm glad that you thought I was able to make it seem true to his character and explore some of the more hidden aspects of his personality

[breyzyyin]

Oh, I really enjoyed this! Lolz, if this is all I'm going to get from my FF/Tekken suggestion I will take it: this was great and I'm glad you decided to post it! XD I think you captured the personalities of both characters really well: both Warrior of Light and Zafina are mysterious, but I think you really wrote their characters here with a srong sense of who they are personality-wise! Zafina's dialogue in particular I find to be quite awesome. I also liked how you incorporated the basic premise of Dissidia to make the crossover concept with another series more believable. Great job, sis! ♥

[breyzyyin]

Haha, I'm glad you liked it! I felt bad that I really wasn't able to come up with a multi-chapter story idea for your fic suggestion...so I'm glad that I was finally at least able to give you something in response for that prompt, even if it is only a short story piece. XD

I'm glad you thought I captured both characters really well from a personality and dialogue stance. Zafina has some awesome lines, doesn't she? ♥ Hehe, I kind of like how the Dissidia concept can be used to help make a crossover with another series seem more believable...definitely helped me figure out the idea for this story. :D Thank you very much for your comment, and I'm glad that you liked the story since you helped put the idea in my head awhile ago! You are an enabler, hahah! ♥ :D