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[fics] IX & Dissidia 012: [mis]communication & come dawn

Jan 11, 2013 13:57

I thought I'd linked these here already, but apparently not considering I wrote them both in December, I'm a little slow....

Username: shinkirou-hana
Class: Dragoon

Title: [mis]communication
Summary: It's all in how you say it.
Characters/Pairings: Zidane, Kuja, Squall, Bartz. Slight possibly-implied/ambiguous Kuja/Zidane.
Wordcount: 1,437
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pairing: kuja/zidane, game: final fantasy ix, character: kuja, warning: incest, character: bartz, character: zidane, fanfiction, game: dissidia 012, character: squall

Comments 4

breyzyyin January 11 2013, 18:51:13 UTC

These were both really well-done! Great job (and thanks for sharing them!)! XD

shinkirou_hana January 11 2013, 19:21:18 UTC

Ah, thank you! :D to be honest I'm surprised you read them - only because I was expecting nobody to, not you specifically

breyzyyin January 11 2013, 21:47:56 UTC

POINTS

143 to Team Dragoon!

~I really liked reading both stories. I thought the Dissidia one written from Squall's perspective was pretty cute, and the ending was really well-done! I think you captured all four characters in that one really well. And the second story...gah, it was really soft and sweet, and I liked Kuja and Zidane's interactions and the thoughts/feelings held between them about what was eventually going to happen to Kuja. Your writing and descriptions are amazing, and really help capture emotions wonderfully. Both stories were really wonderful to read, and thank you for sharing them! ♥ :D

shinkirou_hana January 11 2013, 22:13:20 UTC

143 points?! Remind me to write more often....

Ah, I'm so glad to hear all of that about the first one in particular! See, I've never played FFV OR FFVIII so I'm really going based on Dissidia personalities only, so I'm glad they don't seem rampantly OOC! Also endings are a thing I suck at (and I know it) so I'm glad that didn't throw you off either!

That's how I ship them okay?! I'm the only one who ships them at all, but I can only get behind fluffy/cute or snarky things. Again, I'm surprised anyone read the second one, so thank you both~! :D And I'm glad you feel I did a good job of conveying all of that, because without dialogue it is... Both easier and harder, I guess? I mean yes, they technically talk and I just don't indicate it, but they don't talk much. I'd like to think that as they got more comfortable around each other, they wouldn't need to talk as much and would just relax quietly occasionally. So, basically, I'm glad you think I did a good job of encompassing their feelings and such, because experimenting with a new ( ... )