[FIC] FFVIII: Hyperion Rising, Chapter 6

[virago_queen]

Username: virago_queen
Class: Black Mage
Title/Chapter #: Chapter 6: Jailed
Summary: Seifer and his team are captured, tortured, and decide on a new course of action.
Characters/Pairings: Seifer Almasy, Zell Dincht, Selphie Tilmitt, Quistis Trepe, Irvine Kinneas, Rinoa Heartilly, Fujin, Raijin
Chapter word count: 5002
Cumulative word count: 31,347
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[breyzyyin]

POINTS

200 Points to Team Black Mage!

~This story is always really great to see new chapters of! I love how you write the characters, and I'm looking forward to seeing the next chapter in the future just to see what happens (poor Zell though!). Best lines though? Probably when Seifer responds to how Quistis fires lasers from her eyes, haha...and "Seifer blinked away his confusion and filed the statement under the mental heading of 'Selphie Tilmit is a genuine fucking nutcase'"--but there were a lot of well-written and great scenes in this chapter! ♥ You really did come back with a vengeance...and it was an awesome one! :D

[virago_queen]

Thanks for the kind words! <3 This chapter was a pain to get out, so I'm glad it all worked out well!

I love working in references to in-game mechanics like Limit Breaks, because Quistis's base limit is just lol-worthy, especially if you're not expecting it. And that mental heading of Seifer's has a LOT of stuff under it already...lmao. XD