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naliarenegade in moogle_workshop

Like a Heart in My Chest (fic)

Jun 02, 2012 11:23

Username: naliarenegade
Class: Black Mage
Title: Like a Heart in My Chest
Fandom: FFVI
Summary: Sabin and Celes spend a few nights of contemplation in The World of Ruin.
Characters: Sabin and Celes
Total Word Count: 1390
Ratings/Warnings: G. There is a lot of angst and sadness and grasping at straws.
Other Notes: This is for ff_exchange written for Person to the prompt, Celes/ ( Read more... )

pairing: celes/sabin, character: celes, game: final fantasy vi, user: naliarenegade, fanfiction, character: sabin

Comments 2

naliarenegade June 2 2012, 18:33:33 UTC

Constructive criticism is good. Celes is a character that I never would have though I would write, mostly because I know I would do it poorly. I had so much inspiration that I did it anyway. Sabin is a character that I really love, but feel as if I'm grasping at straws. Anything that anyone has to say is helpful.

breyzyyin June 9 2012, 13:17:06 UTC

POINTS

56 Points to Team Black Mage!

~I really liked this story, actually. You're writing is amazing! ♥ I'm not overly-familiar with FFVI, but from what I know about both Sabin and Celes...I think you wrote them both very believably and I think their interactions together in this story were really well-done and rather touching. :D