BSG: This Transparency (Lee/Kara)

Aug 01, 2005 20:43

For brynnmck.

Title: This Transparency
Author: voleuse
Fandom: BSG
Ship: Lee/Kara
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Summary: Here we are at last, alone, without loneliness.
Notes: S1, no spoilers

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bsg: lee-kara, bsg

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liminalliz August 2 2005, 03:53:08 UTC
*squeals* You had to leave it at that! *squeals again*

Very wonderful, as always. EEEE!

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voleuse August 4 2005, 17:17:09 UTC
*g* Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

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bantha_fodder August 2 2005, 03:56:16 UTC
MORE Pablo Neruda? It's like all Pablo, all the time around here.

Not that I have a problem with that, or anything.

BECAUSE WOOO GO LEE.

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voleuse August 4 2005, 17:18:09 UTC
So much Neruda love. I have the sonnets sitting by my desk at all times.

BECAUSE WOOO GO LEE.

Hee!

Thank you!

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svilleficrecs August 2 2005, 04:00:04 UTC
Oh, I really liked how this turned out! The mood was just.... mmmm. Soft and sexy and quietly romantic. And it felt very true to lee. I liked. Did I see that right that you Flocked it? Is there a non Flocked version I could, um, rec? Cause I wanna.

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voleuse August 2 2005, 04:08:04 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

Did I see that right that you Flocked it?

Did I lock it accidentally? Ack! It should be public now, then, and rec away! Thanks.

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fairestcat August 2 2005, 04:12:15 UTC
Oh perfect. I like the way they're dancing around each other here, how Lee keeps pushing closer and closer and even at the end it's uncertain which way Kara will move.

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voleuse August 4 2005, 17:18:28 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

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shadowserenity August 2 2005, 04:58:53 UTC
I'm with svilleficrecs: this story is soft, sexy and quietly romantic. Very lovely done! I liked the description of the different sides of Kara and then Lee bumping foreheads. Great ficlet!

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voleuse August 4 2005, 17:18:43 UTC
Thanks so much!

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